counting your scars and missing the stars [discontinued]

Telepathy can have it's ups and downs. You could accidentally read your brother's mind to find out he's planning on selling you to some creepy agency or you could read your teacher's mind to get all the answers for the pop quiz. Overall, it's a win/lose situation, until he was back to fighting for his life like it was with Bro. Dave doesn’t know the exact moment when everything went to shit, but he could say it had to do with one Karkat Vantas.Your name is Karkat Vantas and you're the new student at a new school in a new state because your father was murdered. You don't want to talk about it. You say you're a normal teenager, turned fourteen in the summer, but you would be lying through your teeth. But it was something you could deal with, that is, until Dave Strider came and fucked up everything.(recently changed title from: you're such an actor)

first chapter is good now! i think,, tell me my mistakes in the comments.TRIGGER WARNINGS IN THIS FIC:-child abuse-blood and mild gore-descriptive of child abuse-Bro (unironically)-panic attack(s)-mentions of bullying, past bullying, and mental disorders-implied suicide attempt