I promised myself I'd learn to be the one who leaves

Regulus Black hated everything about himself. He hated his body, he hated his voice, he hated how hard it was to show how he felt, he hated "The Noble and Most Ancient House of Black", and most of all he hated his brother. The only thing Regulus did not hate, was his friends. They were the only people around when everything got too tough. They were each other's shoulders to lean on when the pressure from their families became too much to bare, or when they weren't able to leave the common room without being called murderers in the making. Honestly, it came as no surprise when they all decided to leave together. Well except for the rest of the wizarding society. _____Regulus and Friends finally have enough of the wizarding society and run off to live with the muggles. They also start a band!

This is my first time writing a story like this, I'm really excited about where it's going but I hope you all can share some criticism or tips you think can better my writing. Thank you :]