The Spectacular Peter Parker

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A year since the downfall of the Green Goblin, Peter Parker is continuing his crime-fighting career as Spider-Man, but what has happen along the way will not only make him get involved in a world he was never expecting but become part of something he never thought he would be in. This story was removed, OA is Silentman87 and story is discontinued.
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Warning: I do not own Spider-Man, nor this Story.

 

This story deserves to be available for readers to read. This Story was removed, it deserved to be available, Original Author is Silentman87 as i don't own this story or its work.

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16: The Wake Fight

REVIEW'S RESPONSE:

latinoheat151: Here's Kate. Sun Wukong is a man, so no romance. Black Cat and Green Goblin are planned

williams: Thank you for liking my version of Madame Web, and she will reappear again later on in the story

The Wake: Inside

Inside the nightclub is full of party goers as they are seen drinking and dancing as the males and the females flirt with each others as they party on the dance floor, but in one particular table are four young girls from "Hawthorne Academy" who are seen drinking

Britney Amber Fox: Alright girls! Drinks are on me! It's party time!

Kate Bishop, Josephine Bricklemoore and Priscilla Ironwood: Woe!

The four girls drinks while they talk about their day

Kate Bishop: Oh man! This is exactly what I needed!

Josephine Bricklemoore: Thank you for freeing me from the clutches of the den that is homework and studying and the occasional prison of annoyance of privileges that is my parents!

Britney Amber Fox: You're welcome Josy! And it's all thanks to Remy and his handcrafted fake ID's!

Kate Bishop: And most of all thank you Priscilla for coming with us! You've been awesome so far!

Priscilla Ironwood: Um, thank you!

Josephine Bricklemoore: She means it Priscilla! And now we get to use you for every and all kinds of stuff!

Priscilla Ironwood: Wait! What!?What do you mean you want to use me!?

Britney Amber Fox: Relax Priscilla I'm not going to seduce you or anything! Unless I get even drunk then we'll see!

Priscilla Ironwood: Uh!?

Kate Bishop: Relax Priscilla she's just messing with you! She actually meant we're just glad you're with us!

Britney Amber Fox: What she said! I mean we manage to sneak in here without our parents knowing about it!

Priscilla Ironwood: Oh so I'm just a cover for an excuse so you can go to any party you like!

Josephine Bricklemoore: Sure. Think about it every time we need an excuse to get out of the house we get to say we're studying at Priscilla's house

Kate Bishop: That I can agree on, but most of all you need to loosen up Priscilla! Free yourself from those science books you've been studying for once in a while

Priscilla Ironwood: Well I can't help it that I need better grade for my future!

Britney Amber Fox: I wouldn't worry about it so much

Priscilla Ironwood: Oh no!? Aren't you supposed to be in some recording for your next song!?

Britney Amber Fox: Told them I need more work on my lyrics!

Kate Bishop: Careful if it takes too much of your time or else you're going to loose something important

Britney Amber Fox: You mean like the fact that you will never get to see that Peter Parker guy again?

Kate became surprised by Britney mentioning Peter Parker

Kate Bishop: What!?

Priscilla Ironwood: Who?

Britney Amber Fox: Peter Parker!

Josephine Bricklemoore: Who's he?

Britney Amber Fox: Some guy Kate met, who also took photos of Spider-Man

Josephine Bricklemoore: Wait, really?

Priscilla Ironwood: You mean that Peter Parker, the Bugle Photographer!?

Britney Amber Fox: That's the one

Josephine Bricklemoore: Seriously,When did that happen!?

Kate Bishop: In a social event hosted by Silver Incorporated

Josephine Bricklemoore: No way

Priscilla Ironwood: Oh my god you actually met Peter Parker!?

Kate Bishop: Yes I did, and I was quite lucky to meet him

Britney Amber Fox: But let's just face it. What you had back then is a one time thing that's never going to come back

Kate Bishop: Oh screw you Britney

Priscilla Ironwood: So what is he like!?

Kate Bishop: Believe it or not he's actually the same age as us, plus he's pretty cute

Britney Amber Fox: Seriously Katie, what is it about this guy you like besides him chasing after the guy that shoots webs out of his hands!?

Kate Bishop: I find him interesting okay!? Like when I first talked to him he just so… understanding. Like I can actually have a real conversation with him, and to top that he talks to me like any other person

Britney Amber Fox: So? Most of the guys you hook up do that

Kate Bishop: Except most of them don't pretend to listen to me or try doing something stupid so they can try to make out with me, but he listens to me and he doesn't try to impress me. This guy even tries to get to know me and not do anything stupid, but most of all he's modest and polite.

Priscilla Ironwood: He sounds amazing

Josephine Bricklemoore: Now I'm getting interested

Britney Amber Fox: Boring

Kate Bishop: Oh you wouldn't know. You would prefer guys do things for you

Britney Amber Fox: That's because they're jut that easy to mold around

Kate Bishop: Figures

Britney Amber Fox: Besides, don't you have Brigham Fontaine before?

Kate Bishop: Can we please not bring him up

Josephine Bricklemoore: Except its Brigham Fontaine

Kate Bishop: Brigham is not what I had in mind

Britney Amber Fox: He's gorgeous, athletic, a model material

Priscilla Ironwood: Not to mention he's brilliant

Josephine Bricklemoore: A lot of girls are still in shock that you dump him, plus it's Brigham Fontaine. You two were like the hottest couple in all of Hawthorne Academy, and you guys are like so right for each other

Kate Bishop: Except he's also a jerk. Brigham maybe popular, but he's such a jerk, and he sees me like I'm some prize for his reputation so he can maintain his so-called image as a god in everybody's eyes. He's not only a jerk he is just boring, but with Peter he makes me feel like I can be myself, like I don't have to appear like I'm from this prestige family that can do whatever she wants but just be myself. That what this guy makes me feel and I like hanging around with him

Britney Amber Fox: Look Katie, I so love you and all that, but this is Brigham Fontaine we're talking about. He is perhaps the best match you've got so far out of that Academy. So what if Brigham is not the one, we still date them because they are that easy to mold and manipulate if you have the right tools

Priscilla Ironwood: Is that how you do it with the other guys you've dated?

Britney Amber Fox: If it means turning the dummies into your own personal boy toy then I'm guilty as charged

Kate Bishop: Oh that's very nice of you to share that with us

Priscilla Ironwood: Didn't think I would hear that

Josephine Bricklemoore: You girl will never find a man of your own one day

Britney Amber Fox: I'm a teen pop-star with a modeling career on the way. I can get a guy of my own

Kate Bishop: Well I can't stay here for long, I have to be home before my curfew or else I would have another face-to-face time with my Dad telling me that I have to remember my status as a member of a privileged society, and as a member of the Bishop family. A responsibility I need to take seriously

Britney Amber Fox: Responsibility is for people who try too much that get nothing

Josephine Bricklemoore: Katie does charity work for her Mom

Britney Amber Fox: Which her Dad uses for his company's image

Priscilla Ironwood: A company she might own one day

Josephine Bricklemoore: That she has a point

Kate Bishop: Yeah thanks. My Dad wants me to work in his company one day

Britney Amber Fox: But let's not forget you would make one sexy office girl, and all the guys will come after you!

Kate Bishop: They wish, but they need to earn my attention before they can't touch this piece of ass!

Britney Amber Fox: Amen to that, but speaking of guys let's start what I like to call it my favorite game called "Feast a Hot Guy". Starting with you Priscilla!

Priscilla Ironwood: Huh!?

Britney Amber Fox: That's right because we're gonna help you bag yourself a guy to sink your teeth on so we could share him!

Priscilla Ironwood: Huh!? But I-

Britney Amber Fox: Plus older guys would dig you real bad

Priscilla Ironwood: I don't know how I would reply to that

Josephine Bricklemoore: Oh come on Priscilla. Behind those glasses and that hair of yours I know there's a hot girl behind it that I know guys would go for. Heck some guys would go for the young sexy science girl in those movies if you know what I mean

Kate Bishop: She has a point. You are pretty cute Priscilla and I know guys would like that in a girl

Priscilla Ironwood: Easy for you to say, I've never actually been on a real date before!

Josephine Bricklemoore: Well tonight we are going to change that

Britney Amber Fox: Well then come on girls! Dinks! Party! Dance floor! Cute guys! Focus here! Before we can go back to our boring lives I want get my groove on before some paparazzi comes in and tries to ruin my image so our parents won't find out. So I say we drop the ball and let's focus on other things besides-

Kate Bishop: Peter!?

Just then three individuals enter the building, as Kate took notice of it and recognize one of them being Peter Parker

Britney Amber Fox: What?

Kate Bishop: Those three guys over there! I think one of them… is Peter Parker!

Josephine Bricklemoore: Peter Parker!? Here!?

Kate Bishop: Yeah!

Priscilla Ironwood: No way

Britney Amber Fox: Where!?

Kate Bishop: Over there

Kate pointed out to the girls who were surprised to see Peter Parker in a nightclub as well

Kate Bishop: Peter Parker

Britney Amber Fox: Wow. I gotta admit he's actually kind of good-looking

Josephine Bricklemoore: He's real good-looking

Priscilla Ironwood: I don't believe it, that's actually Peter Parker!?

Kate Bishop: What's he doing here!? And who are those guys!?

Peter, Willis, and Mitchell met to one of the Bouncers guarding the VIP floor

VIP Bouncer: Hey, hey, hey. This is the VIP room, and no freebees allowed ( BAM ) Oof…

Willis suddenly punches the Bouncer and knocks him down

Peter Parker: Holy crap!?

Willis Wong: Let's move. We're behind schedule

Willis and Mitchell went in as Peter follows as he sees the injured Bouncer. Once in they went upstairs to the VIP floor

The Wake: VIP floor

Peter, Willis, and Mitchell arrived as they see a couple of gang members wearing black t-shirts with logos of the Snakehead on it as they approach

Snakehead Thug 1: Hey! Who let you boys in!?

Willis Wong: We're looking for Benny. He in

The Snakehead Thug called Benny over

Snakehead Thug 1: Hey Benny!

Benny: Yeah!?

Snakehead Thug 1: Some guys are asking for you!

Benny then came forward and approached the three

Benny: Hey there. What can I do for you three?

Willis Wong: Yeah. We got a message from an old friend of yours, Christopher Chen

Benny then became surprised after hearing Chen's name

Willis Wong: C-Chen!?

Mitchell Han: Yeah. You know the guy you dumped for Negative

Benny: Wha-Wha-Wait. I don't think it's such a good idea

Snakehead Thug 1: Hey! You think some Lotus Shadow punk could just walk right in and just claim what it's ours!

Willis Wong: Except it was ours to begin with

Snakehead Thug 2: Man! Fuck you!

Some of the Snakehead thugs took out their taser sticks and set it to full blast

Peter Parker: Guys?

Willis Wong: Don't worry Parker

Mitchell Han: Yeah man. He got this

Peter Parker: And you?

Mitchell Han: I've never done something like this before

Peter Parker: Wait. What?

Mitchell Han: I thought with Willis it would be a piece of cake

Peter Parker: Are you kidding me?

Snakehead Thug 1 approach Willis

Willis Wong: Han

Mitchell Han: I know. Kid, stay close to me

Peter Parker: Mitchell

Mitchell Han: Seriously kid, get to cover

Snakehead Thug 1: I suggest you better leave Wild boy

Willis Wong: Or what!?

Snakehead Thug 3: Or this!

Peter Parker: ( Spider-Sense ) Huh!?

Suddenly one of the Snakehead thugs raised his taser stick and tries to land a blow until Peter grabbed it, and without thinking he redirected back at him as the taser shocked him and kicked him back at another Snakhead thug as Peter wield the taser stick on his right hand. Both Mitchell and Wills along with the rest of the Snakeheadn Thugs watched in surprise

Willis Wong: What the!?

Peter Parker: Huh?

Mitchell Han: Kid! How did you do that!?

Peter Parker: Um, I had some training

Snakehead Thug 1: That does it! Waste those Lotus fucks!

The Snakehead Thugs then fought against the three, with Willis holding his own and Mitchell barely standing. Using his own skills as Spider-Man while holding his own strength back Peter manages to purposely dropped his taser stick and appear taking the blow from the thugs, but he manages to beat down most of the thugs and smash one of them on a glass table

Peter Parker: (Okay. Gotta play the tough guy here, so I better whack them hard without breaking a bone) Is that it!? Heard you guys are like the toughest, but so far I'm not impressed!

Snakehead Thug 1: You're gonna pay for that you little punk!

The Snakehead Thug 1 took out his taser stick and charged in for the attack until Peter counters it and threw him in a fish tank and was electrocuted from his taser stick

Peter Parker: Whoa!

Willis Wong: Holy!?

Mitchell Han: Kid! That was awesome!

Peter then sees Benny running off

Peter Parker: Hey wait!

Willis Wong: Go after him Parker! We got this!

Peter Parker: Okay!

Peter chases after Benny as Willis and Mitchell are still fighting some of the remaining Snakehead Thugs. People in the nightclub started to ran off with some in cover, among them are Kate, Josephine, Priscilla, and Britney

Priscilla Ironwood: Oh my god!?

Britney Amber Fox: What's going on!?

Josephine Bricklemoore: Don't care! Let's just get out of here!

Kate Bishop: Okay!

Britney Amber Fox: But I wanna know what's going on!?

Kate Bishop, Josephine Bricklemoore and Priscilla Ironwood: Britney!

Britney Amber Fox: What!?

Just then, Benny is seen running down from the stairs and heading towards the bathroom with Peter chasing after him but is confronted by more Snakehead thugs, with Kate, Josephine, Priscilla, and Britney watching

Priscilla Ironwood: Holy

Kate Bishop: Peter?

Josephine Bricklemoore: He's in trouble

Britney Amber Fox: Oh there is no way he would win this

The Snakehead thugs approached as Peter stood his ground, as an Overweight Snakehead thug called out

Overweight Snakehead Thug: You're surrounded kid! Your Lotus Shadow friends won't save you this time!

Peter Parker: We'll see! Come on!

Overweight Snakehead Thug: Take this kid down!

The Snakehead thugs attack as Peter used his spider-sense to counter their moves. One-by-one he managed to hold of on his own as he beat some of them down using whatever object he found and with his spider-sense he manages to counter their moves. Beating most of them to the ground and delivers a striking blow of punches and kicks on the Snakehead thugs. Leaving only one left

Peter Parker: This it!?

Overweight Snakehead Thug: You're gonna pay for that when I break your face!

The Overweight Snakehead thug attack Peter as he tries to evade his blows as he discovers how strong he appears to be, but as he plays it defensively Peter discovers a way to beat him

Peter Parker: Whoa!

Overweight Snakehead Thug: HAH! IS THAT IT LITTLE BOY!? IS THIS WHAT THE WILD PACK HAS TO OFFER!? BECAUSE ALL I SEE IS A WHIMPERING COWARDLY LITTLE BOY!

Peter Parker: Well here's one thing this little boy has that you don't!

Overweight Snakehead Thug: AND WHAT IS THAT LITTLE WHITE SCHOOL BOY!?

Peter Parker: Would you believe I'm good at biology and watched kung-fu movies!?

Overweight Snakehead Thug: HAH! WHAT DOES THAT HAVE TO DO WITH ANYTHING LITTLE NERD!?

Peter Parker: This!

Using his spider-strength and his knowledge of the human body, Peter targeted the Overweight Snakehead thug through his pressure points. Leaving his arms temporarily paralyzed

Overweight Snakehead Thug: WHAT THE FUCK!? WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME!?

Peter Parker: Like I said! I use science!

Overweight Snakehead Thug: YOU SON OF A-

Peter Parker: YOU'VE JUST MESSED WITH THE WRONG NERD!

With the Overweight thug stunned, Peter delivered his own blows and punches him in the face and proceeded towards a table. Peter then sees above him a large screen TV above him and thought of a move as he proceed forward

Peter Parker: Alright you!

Overweight Snakehead Thug: Huh?

Peter Parker: GET SOME!

( WHAAM )

Peter ran and jumped on the table as he grabbed and rips off the large screen TV and smashed the overweight thug with it on the head, leaving him unconscious. With the fight over as Peter stood the victor, Kate, Josephine, Priscilla, and Britney peeked out of the corner without being seen as they could not believe what they saw. That the Peter Parker they knew in school could fight and won against a group of Snakehead thugs

Priscilla Ironwood: 

Kate Bishop: 

Josephine Bricklemoore: 

Britney Amber Fox: … No… way…

Priscilla Ironwood: Wow…

Josephine Bricklemoore: That… That is…

Kate Bishop: I don't believe it

Britney Amber Fox: No… way

Priscilla Ironwood: The way… he moves…

Josephine Bricklemoore: He can actually fight?

Britney Amber Fox: No way

Kate Bishop: Peter, what are you?

Just then, Willis and Mitchell arrived as they saw and could not believe that Peter had won the fight

Willis Wong: What the!?

Mitchell Han: Holy shit!? Kid you did this!?

Peter Parker: Talk later! Right now Benny's in the bathroom and we have to get to him fast or else we'll attract more attention!

Willis Wong:… Yeah… Yeah he's right. Let's just move

Mitchell Han: Seriously kid! Did you really do this!?

Peter Parker: Mitch! Focus! Now!

Mitchell Han: Alright. Oh free drink

Mitchell picks up the glass of alcohol drink as the three head to the bathroom were Benny is as they kicked the door down, but Peter's spider-sense was triggered

Peter Parker: ( spider-sense ) LOOK OUT!

Willis Wong: Huh!?

Snakehead Thug 3: EAT LED!

Peter pushes Willis and Mitchell away from the firing range as Snakehead Thug 3 fired his gun, but with his quick thinking Peter picks up the drink Mitchell was holding and threw it in his face.

The Wake: Male Bathroom

With the thug out of balance Peter rushed in and kicked the thug as he landed on one of the toilet doors, which broke open and Benny is seen hiding. Peter approached him as Willis and Mitchell enters

Benny: Holy!?

Peter Parker: Hey there Benny

Willis Wong: Alright Benny you have a lot to answer for!

Benny: No please listen to me!

Willis grabbed Benny and pinned him on the floor

Benny: Please no!

Willis Wong: The Snakehead!? You bailed us and the Wild Packs for the Snakehead!?

Mitchell Han: Seriously Benny!? After all the time we've known each other!?

Benny: Well what am I suppose to do!? They were threatening to murder my employees and burn down my business! What am I suppose to do!?

Willis Wong: You should have come to us! We would have helped!

Benny: You don't know what you're doing! These guys are not the same Snakehead gang you know! These guys are dangerous and they mean business!

Willis Wong: Well so are we, and we've just proven it!

Mitchell Han: Dude they suck! Even this kid stood out against ten of these guys! Which is awesome by the way

Peter Parker: Thanks Mitchell

Benny: These guys are just lower-rank. What they've got is nothing I've seen before, and the weapons are nothing I can describe!

Willis Wong: Like I can buy that

Peter Parker: Wait a minute. What do you mean by that?

Benny : The Snakehead are just lower-ranks. The higher-ranks are much more deadly! The Inner Demons!

Peter Parker: Inner Demons. Who are they?

Benny : They are the top guys that no one can beat! It's like they're immortal or something? It's like magic!

Peter Parker: Immortal? Magic!?

Willis Wong: Stop making this up Benny. Like we believe in that bullshit!

Benny: I'm serious! What the Inner Demons got is noting you fellas faced before! These guys mean business, and their boss

Mitchell Han: Who? Negative?

Willis Wong: You've met Negative? What about him?

Benny: I-I didn't really met him for sure, but I know what he's capable of. Believe me when I tell you this. This is the one guy you should never cross! He's dangerous and he will get to you by getting to anyone you've ever cared about! And now you've dealt with their thugs he'll know and he's gonna come after me! Hell he could even come after you if he sees your face!You can't stop this guy! No one can

Peter then sees the look on Benny's face and realizes how afraid he is and approaches him

Peter Parker: Listen to me Benny

Benny: Huh?

Peter Parker: Look I know that you're afraid about this Negative guy, but I do know that if he doesn't want to loose this place then he would have place stronger guys here. He didn't and we've just beaten them easily

Benny:

Peter Parker: I don't know what your situation, but whatever's going on you can tell us and we can help

Benny:… What do you want from me?

Peter Parker:… All we want… was for you to be our friend. No catch, no price, no nothing

Willis Wong:

Mitchell Han: 

Benny:… They'll kill my employees

Peter Parker: That won't happen! We won't allow it! Right guys?

Willis Wong:… Yeah… Yeah we won't let it happen

Mitchell Han: That's right man. And you're a nice guy to work with

Peter Parker: So what do you say Benny. You can count on us?

Peter made Willis release him as he extended his hand to Benny

Benny:

Peter Parker: You're a nice guy Benny. I can tell… and you don't need to be afraid of the Snakehead or the Inner Demons. Not while we're here… Okay?

Benny: You… You can help me?

Peter Parker: Yeah I can. Count on it

Benny:… Okay… Okay fine

Benny grabbed Peter's hand and was lifted up but looked at him still with fear and doubt in his eyes

Benny: He'll still come after me. I know it

Peter Parker: That won't be a problem, right Willis?

Willis Wong: Yeah. Well provide extra protection if you needed it

Benny:… Okay… Okay…

Peter Parker: Mitchell. Get Benny a drink. He might need one

Mitchell Han: No problem Parker. Come on Benny

Benny: Sure

Mitchell takes Benny to one of the club's bar, then Willis approached Peter with an impressed look on his face

Willis Wong:

Peter Parker:… What?

Willis Wong: You held your own pretty well

Peter Parker:… Guess I got lucky

Willis Wong: Yeah you do, but you still got some bruise.

Peter Parker: Yeah

Willis Wong: But that doesn't change the fact on your performance

Willis placed his hand on Peter's shoulder

Peter Parker:

Willis Wong: You did good today Parker, you did real good. Looks like Sable knows what she's doing

Peter Parker: Yeah… I guess so

Willis Wong: When we get back I'm putting in a good word for you, but I think you might need a band-aid

Peter Parker: I'll heal

Willis Wong: Well whatever kid. Nice work

Willis left the bathroom pleased with today's result, but Peter can't help but get curious as to what Benny said about the Inner Demons and Mr. Negative. Wondering what has happened

Peter Parker: (… Magic… It can't be it. Man this has just more complicated then ever. What the heck have I just got myself into?)

AUTHOR'S NOTE: You as for Kate's return and here she is, but is now with some friends. Also I've taken elements from the video game "Sleeping Dogs", as this is pretty much inspired from the Club Bam Bam scene

As I said before I wanted to include characters outside the Spider-Man cast, but only if they works, and here only two is from a Spider-Man series and the other one isn't. Obviously they are Kate's friends as they are from Hawthorne Academy,and they all come from rich and successful families

Britney Amber Fox is a character from "Ultimate Spider-Man issue 118", and in that issue she's a pop star who frequently dates Johnny Storm, which he only dates her because she's hot despite being annoyed by her. In here she will act like a Norah Winters character, but still retains her pop star career

Priscilla Ironwood is a character from "Marvel Team-Up issue 80", and in that issue she is a former love interest of Peter Parker and the two use to date until her father was killed. Here she's the cute nerd girl with glasses that they like to hangout with

Josephine Bricklemoore, or Josy as I would call her in short, is a character from "Wolverine and the X-Men issue 38. In that issue she is part of SHIELD's Mutant Task Force and was injected with Mutant Growth Hormones, which temporarily turned her into the mutant "Squidface" to infiltrate the Jean Grey School along with her twin brother, Joseph Bricklemoore, or Joey for short . Here she is another friend of Kate, and like her 616 counterpart she has a twin brother, who will appear later on in the story

On a last note there will be a delay in the story as I need to sort the plot out and will continue later on with more introduction of characters. So enjoy it because it's going to be a while

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