I feel like there is an excessive amount of commas in chapter 3 FanFiction

My First Story * Incomplete*

My First Story * Incomplete*

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Updated
18.04.2025
Fandom
Harry Potter - J. K. Rowling
Characters
Severus Snape, Ron Weasley, Hermione Granger, Tom Riddle, Harry Potter/Tom Riddle, Harry Potter Characters, Dobby (Harry Potter)
Tags
The Author Regrets Everything Dark Harry Potter Albus Dumbledore Bashing Ron Weasley Bashing Hermione Granger Bashing Smart Harry Potter Sane Tom Riddle Harry Potter Has a Pet Snake Confused Severus Snape A Asshole Snake BTW I feel like there is an excessive amount of commas in chapter 3
We all know the story of Harry Potter's fourth year, right? Well what would happen if Harrys name wasn't the only thing on the paper from the goblet.What if he's more slytherin than we think. What if he knows more then we do...This work has been aban...