Chapter 9
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9: The Ronin
REVIEW'S RESPONSE:
Dusk Mind: I'll try to work on it, but I'm trying to develop Gwen as a villain since I've already thought about how it would go. I'll try to balance the characters out
Rider Paladin: I've actually thought about "Identity Crisis", and yeah I was thinking about those four identities, but for the theme of the story I need to think of something new, and here it is
2 days later
Parker House: Peter's Room: 5:34am
Peter looked though the internet in his computer and saw many people writing messages and paying their respects to Spider-Man, who many of them Peter had saved, even the Bugle has started to pay their respects to him
Peter Parker:Don't believe it. All these people showing their appreciation, and all because Spider-Man is dead!? Unbelievable and even the Bugle are paying their respects. Heh, can't believe Spider-Man meant that much to so many people. Guess I should have appreciated how much I've meant to them. Not so much to Menace though. (Peter looked on screen with messages flooding around as they talk about the villain that killed him, Menace)… Menace. A lot of people have been flooding hate messages about her for killing Spider-Man, and even going so far as to call for her execution. The people here are really after for her blood, but I know what kind of a person she really is, and she's being forced into this gang war she mentioned. There must be something special about her, like she got herself maybe a connection or something, which could be the reason why they want her and maybe it's the reason she's being forced into something she doesn't want to do. Whoever this Menace is she's in trouble and she just became my priority and I'm gonna have to deal with whoever is making her do this, but I can't do this as Spider-Man. It's like Madame Web said, they may target her family or something if they found out Spider-Man is alive. No choice, I'm gonna need a new costume and a new identity. But what am I gonna do then? "Work behind the scenes" she said, "The answer will come to you" she said, yeah right, but how?
Peter then starts to think, but then looks back at the Silver Incorporated card he got from Sable Manfredi. Seeing that card got Peter to think and starts to wonder, could this be the answer. Peter then looked on the internet to learn more about Silver Incorporated and looked through information and rumors of any connections involving Sable's father and his connection. While he's looking through, Peter decided to get ideas for his new costume as he realizes that his new identity must be intimidating if a gang war were to happened, and things about one he once thought about during his childhood he grew interested in, Ninjas. Peter looked through possible designs and came up with some ideas. A black ninja costume with yellow lining and armor on arms and legs
Peter Parker:Now how the hell am I going to afford those?
Day 1
Somewhere in Manhattan: 11:07am
While heading towards his destination, Peter is taking ideas that he saw while watching internet videos and decided to train himself as he learns parkour as well as new fight moves
Peter Parker:Wow. Never thought this could be a kind of workout. Been swinging this whole time I can't even remember doing stuff like this (Peter jumps and slides from building to building using the environment around him) Man I don't even know how Ninjas can do something like this
Martial Arts Store
Peter arrived and enters a Martial Arts store and met with the store owner
Martial Arts Store Owner:Can I help you young man?
Peter Parker:Um, yeah. I was wondering if you have any… Ninja clothing
Martial Arts Store Owner:Heh. What is it with you Americans being deeply fascinated with Ninjas?
Peter Parker:… Uh…
Martial Arts Store Owner:Yes we have them, and what kind of Ninja clothing you want?
Peter Parker:I want something that's easily movable, thick fabric, and in pure black
Martial Arts Store Owner:This is ninja clothing, everything is black
Peter Parker:Great
Martial Arts Store Owner:But can you afford it?
Peter realizes that he is spending the money he's been saving for his new Spider-Man costume, but also knows that it's important for his new one
Peter Parker:… I… have money
Martial Arts Store Owner:Well good, because I have one that can fit a man of your size and it will cost you. And if you want it done today with few extra touches then pay more, and I can have it ready for you in the evening if I can call my staff
Peter Parker:… Ugh… how much?
Day 2
Daily Bugle HQ: 4:43pm
Peter enters his workplace and discovers how busy it is, with reports of crime increase happening in the city since Spider-Man's death, as Peter Parker enters Jameson's office
Peter Parker:Um, Mr. Jameson
J. Jonah. Jameson:Not now Parker!
Peter Parker:But J.J.
J. Jonah. Jameson:No buts kid!?
Peter Parker:But I just need-
J. Jonah. Jameson:Another assignment!?
Peter Parker:Well
J. Jonah. Jameson:Not gonna happen kid! Especially what happen last time, and my wife was hounding me all night that I gave you that assignment, so this time I'm not having your neck on the line
Peter Parker:What do you mean?
J. Jonah. Jameson:From this moment on you're out of the gig until this blows away!
Peter Parker:What!?
J. Jonah. Jameson:You heard me, so get your paycheck and go home until I called you!
Peter Parker:You're firing me!?
J. Jonah. Jameson:Don't take this personally kid, but I'm gonna let you get yourself killed! Plus my wife would leave me if anything happens to you! Crime is literally increasing around this city since Spider-Man is gone, and those god forsaken cops wouldn't even do anything about it
Peter Parker:And that's why I wanna talk to you about! The possibility of multiple crime faction engaging in the city. Something big is going to happened!
J. Jonah. Jameson:Small gangs won't even mean a thing. If you find anything good then I'll consider it
Peter Parker:But
J. Jonah. Jameson:What do you want a medal!? Get out! OUT!
Peter got out of the office feeling disapointed that he can no longer work in the Bugle
Peter Parker:Oh man
Betty Brant:Don't feel upset Peter, he's just doing this because of what's happening now
Peter then turns to Betty as they spoke
Peter Parker:Betty
Betty Brant:Here. I'll give you something extra for your hard work
Peter Parker:But I need this
Betty Brant:I know, but it's too dangerous now. You're just have to set this out until everything's fine
Peter Parker:…
Betty Brant:Just don't push yourself too hard, and on the bright side you can spend more time with your friends
Peter Parker:… I guess
Betty Brant:Here's your check. Just enjoy yourself
Peter Parker:Thanks Betty
Betty Brant:Anytime Peter
As he was about to leave, Peter then seesNed working on his computer screens, with Frederick talking to him about the info they've got on the streets and appear to be busy
Ned Lee:The info was credible, but I don't think Jameson is going to buy it
Frederick Foswell:Well according to my sources, there's been a build up, and it's not looking to good
Ned Lee:So what do we do now?
Frederick Foswell:I don't know, but if it is true then we're talking about more then just about a crime faction brawling each other
Ned Lee:Well that sucks. If only we can get something inside
Frederick Foswell:I know, but we got to keep trying
Out of curiosity, Peter approachedFrederick and Ned with an idea
Peter Parker:Uh, Foswell? Ned?
Ned Lee:Hey Pete, what is it?
Peter Parker:I couldn't help but wondering about crime faction you are talking about?
Frederick Foswell:That's something you shouldn't get yourself involved kid
Ned Lee:Yeah Pete, especially since you've survived one explosion
Peter Parker:Well I think I have something that might help you with this
Frederick Foswell:I appreciate this, but I think you had enough problems to deal with
Ned Lee:Yeah, but we appreciate with whatever you're offering it's not worth it
Peter Parker:Not unless I get you something from the inside
Ned and Frederick tuned to Peter after hearing what he just said
Ned Lee:What?
Peter Parker:Yeah
Frederick Foswell:What do you mean inside
Peter Parker:I can't say it out loud here, so we need to go someplace quiet
Frederick Foswell:Listen kid
Peter Parker:I mean it Mr. Foswell, and you owe me for this
Frederick Foswell:… Alright. Ned!?
Ned Lee:You sure about this Foswell?
Frederick Foswell:Kid helps me out during the Rhino Blueprint bid and the case involving the crime family and the Linclon case. If he wants to help then I guess he's good on my watch
Ned Lee:If you say so. Let's head to the stairway and we'll talk there
Peter Parker:Okay
The three went out of the main Bugle office and into the staiway, as they discuss what's going on
Ned Lee:Okay Parker spill. What we re going to tell you is way bigger then we thought and could involve a lot of lives, and I know Jameson won't want you in this. But if we can pull this off then we might have a chance
Peter Parker:What's going on?
Frederick Foswell:Listen kid, we've been doing some investigation involving the increase in crime since Spider-Man's death
Peter Parker:I now of it, why?
Ned Lee:We think it's something bigger and it might explain why there's a quick increase rate of criminal activities
Frederick Foswell:Most of the crime activity involves mainly gang turfs
Peter Parker:Wait! You following on this?
Ned Lee:You too?
Peter Parker:Yeah. The gang activities that you mention involves their connection to certain crime families seeking to take advantage of the situation
Frederick Foswell:What makes you say that?
Peter Parker:Ever since Lincoln went missing, there's been a power vacuum involving who would be the new Big Man of Crime, and if it escalates any further then it could evolve into a gang-war
Frederick Foswell:A gang-war!?
Ned Lee:You serious!?
Peter Parker:Yeah, I do
Ned and Frederick are surprised by this revelation, but now they knows that there's a connection
Frederick Foswell:I knew there was something going on, but this confirms it
Ned Lee:A gang-war. And to think the situation went this bad since Spider-Man died. Shouldn't it be something only the cops can handle?
Frederick Foswell:Cops can't do anything as of this point with the budget cuts and lower wages, and they'll be paralyze if they go in immediately
Peter Parker:That's why I'm here. I wanna ask you a favor if possible
Frederick Foswell:What do you want kid?
Peter Parker:Info of possible connection and files involving the Manfredi case and Silver Incorporated. Businesses, companies and possibly gang members
Frederick Foswell:Wait, Silver Incorporated? You're talking about Silvermane's daughter?
Ned Lee:You mean Sable Manfredi?
Peter Parker:That's right
Ned Lee:Wait, why would you need that information for? Isn't she straight?
Frederick Foswell:Yeah kid what gives?
Peter Parker:…
Frederick Foswell:… You think she still has connections from her fathers operation
Ned Lee:Is that it?
Peter Parker:… I don't know
Ned Lee:Kid, what's gong on?
Peter Parker:… Listen… I'm going to do something so incredibly stupid, but if I play my cards right then I might be able to pull this off, but if I tell you this, then you must promise me you'd never tell anyone about it. What I say must remain a secret, especially from Jameson, okay?
Ned Lee:… Uh
Frederick Foswell:Yeah. Okay kid, sure
With some reluctance, Peter showed Ned and Frederick the card with a Silver Incorporated logo and a phone number on the back
Ned Lee:… A Silver Incorporated card?
Frederick Foswell:Whose number on the back this is?
Peter Parker:Sable Manfredi's phone number, which she was seen in person at my own house with armed guards, as she handed me this card and telling me a position is open if I wish to work for her
Ned and Frederick were shocked by what they heard that Silvermane's daughter was at Peter's house, which they somewhat understood what he's planning to do
Frederick Foswell:… Wait… Are you planning to do what I think you're doing
Peter Parker:Yeah
Frederick Foswell:… That's… That's…
Ned Lee:An inside job!? You're planning an inside job!?
Peter Parker:It's the only way to know what's gong on
Ned Lee:Peter, are you crazy!?
Frederick Foswell:You are right kid, because this is stupid! Heck this is suicide!
Ned Lee:You are not doing this Peter. This is something either of us would do!
Peter Parker:Except it can't
Ned Lee:What do you mean!?
Peter Parker:I'm the only one she can take in, and if somebody else would take my place then she would get suspicious
Ned Lee:Peter
Frederick Foswell:But kid?
Peter Parker:Guys, there's nobody else that can do this then me. I get you guys done this before, but this is my only chance to get to the bottom of this and get some answers. And if a gang war is going to emerge then I have to do what it takes to stop it.
Ned and Frederick were surprised by Peter's determination. Knowing he's been taking pictures of Spider-Man for over a year, but to see him develop this much confidence and courage has amazed them both
Ned Lee:Kid… Are you serious? Because you are really gonna get yourself killed
Peter Parker:I've been through worse, and besides I'm already a natural in this. So it's no problem for me
Frederick Foswell:Peter… you're really determined to do this?
Peter Parker:I am
Ned Lee:You sure there's nobody else Peter?
Peter Parker:It has to be me that does it, or else it's game over
Ned Lee:…
Frederick Foswell:… And incase if it gets wrong?
Peter Parker:Go to the 32nd Precinct Police Headquarters and get George Stacy, he'll know what to do
Ned Lee:…
Frederick Foswell:… Alright kid. If you think you can do this then I'll get you the file
Peter Parker:Thank you
Ned Lee:I still don't like this idea. Heck Jameson or even Betty would kill me if I didn't stop you, but do we really have a choice?
Frederick Foswell:No we don't, but if anything happens then just better get the heck out of there
Peter Parker:Thanks, but I need to ask a favor of you guys
Ned Lee:What do you need Peter?
Peter Parker:… It's somewhat embarrassing of me to do this, but I need some cash for some materials and equipment
Ned Lee:Huh?
Frederick Foswell:Why you need money for?
Peter Parker:Look this is gonna be something I have to keep to myself, but I need to be prepared if something gonna happen and it might actually be a while if I want to get answers. You guys are just gonna have to trust me
Ned Lee:… How much you want?
Day 3
Amazing Comic Cave: 3:57pm
Peter enters the store where he used to go before he had his spider-powers and met with People he hadn't seen in a long time. An overweight man name Stu, a long-haired blonde man name Mitch, and a skinny curly-haired man name Lou, as they were surprised to recognize an old face
Mitch:By the power of Grey-Skull?
Lou:Holy?
Stu:Peter?
Peter Parker:Hey guys. Long time no see
Stu:Peter! You've come back from the dens of Excelsior!
Stu happily hugged Peter, who felt slightly embarrassed
Peter Parker:(Oh god I cannot believe he still said that?) Hey Stu, miss you buddy
Stu:I miss you too man! You were like my favorite customer to hang around!
Lou:Like over a year, what you've been doing since then!?
Peter Parker:Oh you know. Stuff. Guys gotta make a living
Mitch:I'll say you sold your entire comic book collection of "The Blue Bug Boy". And they're in mint condition. You could have made a fortune in "CashJunk dot com"
Peter Parker:(Which I needed the money to make my first costume and my web-shooters) I just needed a job to pay for my family's bill
Mitch:I heard. A big shot Bugle photographer. That's awesome
Lou:Heck we thought you've given up on us and in comics
Stu:Hey drop it you guys okay. Never got a chance to say this to you Pete… your Uncle was an awesome dude man. Like the Obi-Wan Kenobi to your Luke Skywalker
Mitch:Yeah I heard about that. Sorry man
Lou:I offer my condolences Peter. Even though I never met, I know he's an awesome dude
Peter Parker:… Thanks you guys, that means a lot
Lou:… But be real dude. You also sold "Space Honey Cosplay Girls"!? I mean who in the right mind would do that and not appreciate the absolute beauties of these cosplay girls!?
Peter Parker:It's a Japanese manga series about girls in space saving the universe from an evil alien while fighting in their cosplay while showing their breast and you're talking about me selling them off because you think I was dumping off 2D girls?
Lou:YOU BETRAYED THEM! THEY WERE THERE FOR YOU AND YOU GOT RID OF THEM YOU BASTARD!
Peter Parker:…
Mitch:Ignore him. He got dumped by his girlfriend for not taking their relationship seriously and is back to watching cartoon girls getting on
Lou:2D BEAUTIES FOREVER!
Stu:… Getting to the point, what brings you back?
Peter Parker:A year ago, you once said you knew someone who can make replicas of space armors and other weapons. You got one?
Stu:Dude, not only have I got one, I got lots of em including some replica weapons if you're interested
Peter Parker:Show me
Stu took Peter in the back and showed him real-life replica's of armors based on video games, with one of them caught Peter's interest
Peter Parker:Whoa
Stu:I know right
Peter Parker:And these are real metal?
Stu:All made and all sold
Mitch:And it's good money
Peter Parker:Well in that case I need armor in black with gold lining
Stu:For you, I'll get it done. So interested in the weapons?
Peter Parker:You got anything… Ninja themed?
Stu:Dude. I got just the thing you're looking for
Stu then showed Peter Ninja-themed weapons from other Japanese video games, one in particular is from the Ninja Gaiden series
Peter Parker:Oh my god! Are those!?
Stu:Yeah dude! All based on "Ninja Gaiden"!
Lou:I had a huge boner for Momiji. She's so hot
Mitch:Dude
Lou:What?
Stu:And this one in particular is my favorite. (Stu picked up a curvey sword Peter got interested in) Here it is, the Blade of the Archfiend
Peter Parker:Wow. And it's real steel!?
Stu:Made from a guy in Japan, and only five of them are ever made. And it's sharp. Real sharp.
Peter Parker:Nice
Stu:And if you want something for the defense I also got those Tonfas and Nunchaku from Ninja Gaiden 2?
Peter Parker:Show me those
Mitch:Out of curiosity, what do you need them for?
Lou:Yeah. "Hey girls! You wanna come over to my place!? I got a Space Marine suit and a Ninja sword!" That doesn't usually get the girls to go out with you
Peter Parker:… It's… for a friend… a present
Mitch:Uh-huh?
Stu:Drop it. So then
Peter Parker:… How much all together?
Peter has now purchased the sword, the Tonfas and the Nunchaku, with the Space Marine armor soon to be delivered to Peter's house
Stu:Enjoy your new product dude
Mitch:Again, it's not like you came back to our lives just to get this stuff right?
Lou:I'm agreeing with Mitch on this. What are you up to Parker?
Stu:Does it really matters. He's back and the order has been restored in this holy cave of ours
Peter Parker:Again. Thanks Stu
Stu:For real. It's good to have you back Peter
Peter Parker:Uh thanks. Great to be back I guess
Missy Kallenback:Hi Stu. Did the new issue of "Omega Space Knights" came-
Just as he was about to leave. Peter became surprised as he encounters a teenage girl he had not seen for a long-time since he gained his spider-powers. Missy Kallenback
Missy Kallenback:… Peter?
Peter Parker:… Missy?
Missy Kallenback:Peter. You… you're
Stu:He's back girl
Missy Kallenback:Oh my goodness, Peter!
Missy suddenly hugs Peter in happiness, which surprised him, but she backs of realizing how embarrassing she made herself in front of him. The three realizes this as they left the two alone, with Missy noticing and admiring Peter's appearance as she felt his muscles
Missy Kallenback:Oh-um… I… I'm sorry… I. That… that was really embarrassing of me
Peter Parker:It's okay. I've… had embarrassing moments, this is no different
Missy Kallenback:Hehehe. I… I see you haven't lost your sense of humor
Peter Parker:And I do
Missy Kallenback:You look… different… Muscular even
Peter Parker:Yeah well I have been working out
Missy Kallenback:Y-Yeah… It… it shows
Peter Parker:And you. I see you got your braces out
Missy Kallenback:Yeah. I'm wearing retainers now. Have to keep my teeth straight and clean
Peter Parker:Hehehe. I see you still haven't lost your charm. I think I missed that about you
Missy cover her face abit as she started to blushed after hearing his comment
Missy Kallenback:… I missed you
Peter Parker:What?
Missy Kallenback:I mean… I-I miss seeing you here! It's… just not the same without you
Peter Parker:Oh, yeah. Well I've been busy lately
Missy Kallenback:I noticed. You're a Bugle photographer now
Peter Parker:Yeah
Missy Kallenback:That's… really cool… I… I never imagined you… taking pictures like that… It… it must be scary right?
Peter Parker:Nah. I'm use to it. The more the risk the more I get paid
Missy becomes amazed by his new found bravery and surprised that Peter is the same one she knew over a year ago
Missy Kallenback:That's… that's very brave of you
Peter Parker:Thanks Missy
Missy Kallenback:…
Peter Parker:What?
Missy Kallenback:… Will you… come back… to this store I mean?
Peter Parker:Huh?
Missy Kallenback:It… its just that… I… I really miss see-… talking to you… It's not the same talking to the others… If
Peter Parker:I can come and visit if I got time
Missy Kallenback:R… Really!?
Peter Parker:Yeah. You know what, we can catch up. How about it?
Missy can't helped but feels overjoyed that Peter is coming back and that she would get to see him again
Missy Kallenback:Y… Yeah! Yeah sure!
Peter Parker:Great. I'll see you around Missy
Missy Kallenback:Yeah! I-I'll see you soon Peter
Peter left the store with the items he bought, with Missy hiding her smile as she felt happy that she gets to Peter again after a long time. Stu, Mitch and Lou notices it and Missy felt she's being criticized as they mock her
Stu:…
Mitch:…
Lou:…
Missy Kallenback:… What?
Stu:… Why won't you say it to him?
Missy Kallenback:Say what?
Stu:"Hey Peter! I miss you so much that I felt so lonely without you! I even dream about you in my sleep"
Mitch:"Oh Peter please hold me tight! Wrap me with your strong arms and give me some hard loving!"
Lou:"Oh Peter please make me feel like a woman! I want to have your babies in my belly!"
Missy Kallenback:What!?
Stu:Come on Missy just admit it! You like Peter, but you can't bring yourself to actually admit it or even try to ask him out
Missy Kallenback:I… I…
Mitch:Missy. It's literally that obvious, and I suggest to just go for it
Lou:And if you don't then some other girl would come in and just grab him for herself. I mean the guys a big shot photographer. Girls dig guys with an appetite for danger
Stu:He's right. When he comes back, grab your chance and just go for it
Missy Kallenback:I… I don't know
Mitch:Oh come on Missy. What he's going to say, no?
Missy Kallenback:…
Day 4
Parker House: 9:47 pm
As he made the finishing touches with his new mask, Peter's new costume and gear appeared to be ready
Peter Parker:Done. Holy crap I'm actually done. And with that I can now move to my next one. (Picks up phone and card) Okay Parker, keep your cool, put on your charm, you can do this. It's an inside job and there's a high chance I will die… I cannot believe I'm actually doing this
Sable's Skycadia Penthouse
Sable appeared in her office as she appears to doing some work, until her phone rang with a number she's not familiar with as she picks it up
Sable Manfredi:This is Sable Manfredi speaking, who's this
Peter Parker (on phone):Hello Miss Manfredi. It's me Peter Parker
Sable Manfredi:Peter Parker!? Oh so you finally called, and at this time
Peter Parker (on phone):Oh, sorry about that. Maybe I should call back
Sable Manfredi:No it's fine. I was about to finish up here, and judging by the fact that you called me in my own private number means you've made up your mind about my offer
Peter Parker (on phone):That's what I want to talk to you about. I'll still be going to school at weekdays, so I'll be available at the afternoon. There's gonna be some certain days were my Aunt May needs me, but at this point… I accept your offer for a position to work for you
Sable smiled as she hoped and knew he would accept
Sable Manfredi:I knew you would turn around, and I understand that your education remains a priority, but overall I'm pleased
Peter Parker (on phone):So when do I start?
Sable Manfredi:Next weekend will be good for you. A spot will be ready for you then
Peter Parker (on phone):Thank you Mrs. Manfredi. I'll be looking forward to it Mrs. Manfredi
Sable Manfredi:And I'll be looking forward to your performance Mr. Parker
As Sable hang up the phone, she is then met with Meiko Yin who just entered the room
Meiko Yin:Mistress, I have returned
Sable Manfredi:Just in time because I have news. Peter Parker has called to accept my offer. He starts next week
Meiko Yin:It appears he will join us
Sable Manfredi:Hope you train him well Meiko, because if you are right then we need more able people on board
Meiko Yin:That will also mean getting him involved in this war
Sable Manfredi:…
Meiko Yin:He saved your life Mistress
Sable Manfredi:… I know… But I need to prove to my father that I can do this
Meiko Yin:…
Sable Manfredi:Peter is a very good boy and I like his aunt very much. I will do whatever it takes to ensure his family's safety, that he earned, but this is a serious matter now… and sacrifices will be made if we wish to emerge victorious
Meiko Yin:… And if he survived?
Sable Manfredi:… Then we have gained a valuable asset in this war
Day 5
Somewhere in Manhattan: 10:13 pm
In the streets of New York, a shoot-out was sparked by two rival gangs known as the Bloodhound Street gang and the Super 8 gang. Peter now appeared on one of the buildings as he put on his new costume
Peter Parker:Two gangs in a shoot-out with no care of the civilians. A gang-war is coming, better end this and fast
Peter puts on his new mask and wielded his new Tonfas, as the two gangs continue their assault on each other
Bloodhound Street Member:TOLD YOU NOT TO SET FOOT ON OUR TURF! NOW YOU'RE GONNA TASTE SOME LED!
Super 8 Member:NOT UNTIL YOU DROP DEAD ON THE FLOOR!
?:HOW ABOUT I DROP YOU ALL ON THE FLOOR!
Bloodhound Street Member:Huh!?
Super 8 Member:What the!?
Suddenly, scores of throwing knives hit each of the gang member's guns and knocked them on the floor as the new vigilante appeared and attacked each of the gang members one-by-one with his Tonfas as he knocks them all down
Super 8 Member:Is that Ninja!?
Bloodhound Street Member:EAT THIS YOU MUTHA (BASH) Oof…
The vigilante knocks down the Bloodhound Street member, leaving the Super 8 member standing as he approaches him
Super 8 Member:S… Stay right were you are Ninja boy! I'm loaded!
?:… You seriously think a gun can stop me after I took down all these guys!?
Super 8 Member:…
?:I would seriously think about what I'm doing before leaving with no teeth and broken bones (lifting his Tonfas in attack position) Or do you need a reminder of where this is heading?
In fear as he nears him, the Super 8 member dropped his gun and surrender
Super 8 Member:I… I give okay!? I give!
?:Good. That makes it much easier
Super 8 Member:Huh!? (Bash)…
The vigilante knocks out the Super 8 member to the ground. With the gun-fire stopping and the police heading their way, the vigilante leaves as he jumps from building to building with the civilians looking in amazement
Peter Parker (?):I'm gonna do this, and it's time I raise my A-game. No more jokes, no more witty banter, because that's the thing only Spider-Man would do, and at this point I'm not him. I'm gonna make sure that no one gets hurt, and it's time I have to get ruff if I wanna do this. In this new identity, I have to
Peter now stood on top of a building looking at New York
Peter Parker (Ronin):Okay New York, get ready! Because the Ronin is here!
AUTHOR'S NOTE: Here it is. The identity Peter's going to be as through out this part of the story
The Ronin has been one of my favorite Marvel characters, and I've been itching to try this out. I've been thinking about the "Identity Crisis" storyline were Peter wore four different identities, but I need something that would work for this story. So Ronin was the one thing I wanted to do, and Ninja's are awesome
This version is based on the 616 and not the 1610 (Ultimate) one, but I'm giving him a sort of space armor from those sci-fi games like Halo, and with weapons from Ninja Gaiden 2, since they have awesomer design, like the "Blade of the Archfiend" sword
Another I've added isMissy Kallenback from "The Amazing Spider-Man" movie, who I have not decided what I would do with her. So I'm putting her in this for a later story when Peter decides to go back being Spider-Man. And like her character, she is the science nerd girl with an interest with other comics and manga, and has a huge crush on Peter, as he was also the nerd boy and both of them were the outsiders. I have an idea of what I would do with her, but I'm sure yet until I've written what I would do with her
It's going to take a long time to update since I'm doing another story along with this called "Ultimate Rewrite". I'm doing two stories at the same time, and I'm releasing each chapter in the same day. I originally had four stories that I wanted to do at the same time, but it was too much work and I was confused. So I cut it down to just two, while I put the other two in hold. Check it out though, and anyway I hope you enjoy what I have planned as I'm gonna be adding few more characters in the stories later on
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