Chapter 7
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7: The Encounter
REVIEW'S RESPONSE: A part of me expects this would happen, and so I will say this. Yes, I am making Gwen a villain, but only because the story itself demands it. I wanted to pick an alternative, and so far I couldn't find one, so Gwen is perhaps the only one that fits for what I have in mind. I'm thinking of splitting the story into three arcs. The first arc will have Gwen a villain, until I reach the end were she stops. I have the idea how, but I haven't written it yet. And besides, I've read alot of fanfics here, and I haven't seen anyone thought of turning Gwen a villain, even if it's for a short 's not permanent, but Gwen's role as a villain won't end soon, so just live with it and enjoythe story
Somewhere in New York
Outside Abandoned Warehouse
As Spider-Man follows Warren and Whitman in their car, he stops on a nearby building and sees them entering an abandoned warehouse
Spider-Man:An abandoned warehouse, how very classic. I should have notice this sooner. Is Dr. Warren, the brother of my science teacher, doing something illegal? And what's in the briefcase?
Abandoned Warehouse: Inside
Spider-Man sneaks in the abandon warehouse and hides in the shadows as he sees Miles Warren and Debra Whitman coming out of the car with the briefcase
Spider-Man:So Dr. Warren. Show me what you've got
Miles Warren:I don't like doing business in the shadows, so why don't we just cut the theater act and get this done already
Doctor Octopus:Impatient as always Dr. Warren
Spider-Man:What the heck?
Spider-Man was surprised by the appearance of Warren's associate and mysterious benefactor Otto Octavius, Doctor Octopus, with two armed men
Spider-Man:Oh you are kidding me
Doctor Octopus:I take it you have what I need?
Miles Warren:You have the money for it?
Doctor Octopus:Now now Doctor. You shouldn't rush this to the conclusion. Show me
Debra Whitman handed Miles Warren the briefcase, as he opens it and reveals to Doctor Octopus the tube containers containing chemical liquid substance
Miles Warren:The chemical procedure you've presented has produced an interesting display of progress. One could argue it to be both radical and madness, but this has actually presented itself to be an interesting project. (Miles Warren took one of the tube containers and show it to Doctor Octopus) Cross-Species genetics. The key to adapting genetics from other species into humans. This idea was thought of by Dr. Curt Connors, but merging it with my own project I was able to allow the subject to bare the full might of the species it inhabits but at the same time allow the user full control over it. Using the nanites you've provided Dr. Octavius, you can just control the subject onto your needs. It's a similar process that I've done with one of my subjects. Mr. Mark Allen
Spider-Man:Wait what?
Doctor Octopus:Ah yes, the Molten Man. We'll be able to get him in time
Miles Warren:And I also have one for one of your associates
Doctor Octopus:Electro has proven to be a loyal soldier to my army, although despite his inferiority complex, it will be appropriate that I reward him for his service and ensuring that he remains a useful pawn. It's somewhat embarrassing of me to not have done this myself, but my reaches are limited at this point
Miles Warren:Which is a good thing you have me, and I can provide you with the best
Doctor Octopus:Indeed, which reminds me. (Doctor Octopus used his arms and picked the briefcase from Miles Warren as he opens it) The nanites you've injected on to this formula, are they in the correct frequencies?
Miles Warren:They are, and I can have the remote for you soon, but requires an extra fee
Doctor Octopus:Hehehehe. Always with the money isn't it Warren, and truth be told that has always been your weakness
Miles Warren:I'd be careful of your tone Otto, because I can notify to the authorities about this and you won't have an army to control
Doctor Octopus:Again you are mistaken Warren. I don't need the remote to control my army; I am the remote that controls them. And at this point, I don't need you anymore
Miles Warren:What are you talking about?
Doctor Octopus:Restrained them both
Suddenly, White Dragon and Ricochet appeared and restrained both Warren and Whitman
White Dragon:Haha!
Ricochet:You not going anywhere
Debra Whitman:Dr. Warren!
Miles Warren:What is the meaning of this Octavius!?
Doctor Octopus:Do you really expect to control the matter on me with your ridiculous claim Warren. You should have known better to challenge ones intellect such as mine, and before we precede any further I would like to deal with my other guest if you don't mind
Spider-Man:What? (Spider-Sense) Oh no! (Jumped as Vulture almost strike him) Whoa!
Vulture:Come over here Spider!
Spider-Man:No thanks! I'm allergic to old bird man! (Blast) Agh!
Shocker:Well tough bug!
Spider-Man was blasted by Shocker as he fell in mid-air, Spider-Man is then grabbed by Doctor Octopus as he was bashed onto the ground
Spider-Man:(Slam) Agh!
Debra Whitman:Huh!?
Miles Warren:Spider-Man!?
Doctor Octopus:Spider-Man, I'm glad you could join us on this special occasion
Both Shocker and Vulture approached him
Spider-Man:Well what can I say? I don't want to miss the party. Glad to see you're still in one piece
Doctor Octopus:Yes, well I have been busy keeping a low profile
Shocker:What do you say boss, we squash this bug for good?
Vulture:Yes. Make his death more painful
Doctor Octopus:No. For you see I've gotten myself an idea. One that I think will benefit us
Spider-Man:Oh yeah, what would that be?
Doctor Octopus smiled as he took out and open the briefcase, which Spider-Man now realize what he was thinking
Spider-Man:Oh no
Doctor Octopus:Oh yes. This little tube here contains microscopic nanites that if infuse will be under my control
Spider-Man:You are so not going there
Doctor Octopus:The last time I attempted this was a year back with the Global Portal Codes were Captain Stacy's was to give them to me, until you interfered with my plans and lost my lair and my device
Spider-Man:Yeah well sucks to be you I guess
Doctor Octopus:You've become a bother to the point were I want to crush your skull, but I've decided to let this pass in favor of our new partnership, and I'm always looking for new recruits for my army
Shocker:Ooh, now that's a good idea
Spider-Man:Forget it Ock. Like I'm gonna be your puppet!
Doctor Octopus:Oh but I'm afraid you have no choice. But before I do that I would like to do a test run. White Dragon, bring me Warren's young lady to me
Debra Whitman:What!?
Miles Warren:No Otto! Don't!
White Dragon:Get up woman!
Debra Whitman:NO PLEASE!
Miles Warren:DEBRA NO!
Spider-Man:Wait! What are you doing!?
Doctor Octopus:Just watch arachnid. I think you will like this
Doctor Octopus restrained Spider-Man as White Dragon brought Debra Whitman to him. Doc Ock then looks at the briefcase and found one tube-container with an image of the species. The Scorpion, as he opened it and took out the injection containing the serum inside
Doctor Octopus:Now this looks promising. A serum that contains the genetic codes of the Scorpion. I wonder what would happen if I injected this onto this young lady here?
Debra Whitman:What!?
Miles Warren:NO OTTO! NOT HER!
Spider-Man:DOC! DON'T!
Doctor Octopus:Too late
Debra Whitman:(Doctor Octopus injected Debra Whitman) AGH!
Miles Warren:DEBRA!
Spider-Man:Oh no!
With the serum now inside of her, Debra started to scream in pain as her body started to change. Her hand changed into claws, her eyes turned yellow, parts of her body showed some of her skin turned thick armor, and muscles started to appear.
Miles Warren:Debra…
Vulture:My goodness
Ricochet:Dayuum
White Dragon:That is sick
Shocker:Whoa
Spider-Man:Doc… why?
Doctor Octopus:Arise… my beautiful Scorpion
The transformation was complete; Debra Whitman is now the "Scorpion"
Debra Whitman (Scorpion):… What… did… you… do to… me… WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME!?
Doctor Octopus:Magnificent. Now to test it
Debra Whitman (Scorpion):YOU BASTARD! I'LL KILL!-
Doctor Octopus:Stop!
Debra Whitman (Scorpion):Uuugh…
As Debra was about to attack, Doctor Octopus used the chip in him and control her with the nanites inside and appeared to be in full control
Doctor Octopus:Excellent
Spider-Man:No… way…
White Dragon:Holy crap, it worked!
Shocker:Hehehe. Now that's one way to round up cattle like that. So what about our Doctor friend here?
Miles Warren:Huh!? Wait please! You can't kill me! You need me! I can be a valuable asset to you!
Doctor Octopus:Well here's the thing Warren, I don't need you. I have what I need and I can produce a far better version of this serum with the resources I have obtain. And with it, I will rule this city under my grasp
Miles Warren:No please
Doctor Octopus:Farewell Warren, it was a pleasure working with you, but your usefulness has ended. Debra!
Debra Whitman (Scorpion):Uh?
Doctor Octopus:Kill Dr. Miles Warren
Spider-Man:NO DOC!
Doctor Octopus:I think you will enjoy this show Spider-Man. It can be very educational
Miles Warren:No! DEBRA NO!
Debra Whitman (Scorpion):AAAAAGH!
Miles Warren:(Stab) ACKH!
Spider-Man:NO!
Debra unleashed her claws and stabbed Warren in the chest and kissed him as she spitsacid inside his mouth, causing it to burn and Warren scream in pain as the acid is slowlyburning inside his body. Slowly killing him in the process. Spider-Man witness thehorrific act in shock and disbelief that Miles Warren died in front of him
Shocker:Whoa. Now there is a thing call the "Kiss of Death"
Spider-Man:… Doc… why…
Doctor Octopus:Warren will blackmail me eventually, and I will not have any interference
Spider-Man:YOU KILLED HIM! WHY!? YOU WERE NEVER LIKE THIS BEFORE!
Doctor Octopus:Things have changed arachnid, and it is time to be a part of it
Doctor Octopus took out another tube container with an image of a spider
Doctor Octopus:A spider, how expected
Ricochet:Oh this is going to be good
Vulture:Indeed
Spider-Man:Doc no!
White Dragon:Now we're getting somewhere!
Shocker:Relax son. This is going to be all over soon
Doctor Octopus:And as for your inauguration, let me be the first to say
Spider-Man:Doc! Don't go there!
Doctor Octopus:Welcome Spider-Man… to the Sinister Syndicate!
Suddenly an explosion occurred on the warehouse
Spider-Man:Huh!?
Doctor Octopus:What the!?
Spider-Man:That's my que!
Doctor Octopus:(Smack) Oof!
With Doctor Octopus distracted, Spider-Man broke free and kicked him in the face as he jumped away
Spider-Man:Ready to get some Ock!?
Doctor Octopus:Arachnid!?
White Dragon:Uh boss!?
Doctor Octopus:What!?
Suddenly, a mysterious winged figure appeared as it came crashing down and confront Spider-Man and the Sinister Syndicate with the air covered in dust
Spider-Man:Huh!?
Ricochet:Wha!?
Vulture:What in blazes!?
White Dragon:Who's that?
Doctor Octopus:Who dare interfere!?
The mysterious figure open fired at the briefcase containing the tube containers as most of it was destroyed
Doctor Octopus:NO!
Shocker:Who the Sam hill!?
Ricochet:I got this!
Ricochet proceeded and attacked as the mysterious figure opened fire at him. Avoiding a single hit, Ricochet moved closer to a direct attack
Ricochet:Ya missed!
?:Not quite
As Ricochet moved closer, the mysterious figure dropped her weapon and took out her Flaming Sword. Taking Ricochet by surprise as she stabbed him with it
Ricochet:(Stab) Ugh!
?:Got you
Spider-Man:Holy!?
Vulture:My god!
White Dragon:Oh fuck!?
Shocker:DAN!
As the dust clears, the mysterious figure is revealed to be a grey-skinned female with red eyes and elf-like ears, along with black horns and blonde hair. She also appeared with a black armor with red cape and bat-like wings. Menace
Ricochet:What… are…?
Menace:… They call me Menace… Remember that
Menace pulled her sword out and cut of Ricochet's head off, as she confronts the Sinister Syndicate, who watched in surprise
Spider-Man:No way!
Menace:Oh look, you have a man down. What a shame
Doctor Octopus:HOW DARE YOU! YOU ABOMINATION!
Menace:The names Menace, and as for you Octavuis, my boss wants your head!
Doctor Octopus:Then I dare you try! Take her! I'll deal with the Arachnid!
The Sinister Syndicate attacks Menace in retaliation for killing Ricochet
Vulture:I'll show you who the master of the sky is my dear!
Menace:So far I'm not impressed old man!
As she evaded his attacks, Menace manages to defeat Vulture and was about to kill him until Shocker intervened
Menace:You!
Shocker:I'LL MAKE YOU PAY FOR KILLING DAN YOU FREAK!
White Dragon:Leave me a piece! I wanna fry this bitch!
Shocker:Scorpion, you in!?
Debra Whitman (Scorpion):Grrr…
Shocker:Good girl
Spider-Man continue his brawl with Doctor Octopus, as he questions his motives
Spider-Man:So is this what's it about!? You being the new Big Man!? Taking the keys to the kingdom!? Is that it!?
Doctor Octopus:More than that Arachnid! I want and Empire! Born out of dirt and war! Once this city is mine I will expand throughout the country! The Empire of Octopus will be born and I will reign supreme!
Spider-Man:Like anyone's going to allow tentacle man to be an Emperor!
Doctor Octopus:Oh but money can easily bribe people into accepting it! That's one part of how an Empire can be formed!
Spider-Man:Not gonna happen Otto! Especially what you did today! I won't let you go!
Doctor Octopus:Like you will ever stop me! Even if you put me in jail I will still come out! And I will start over again! No one will stop me! No-What!?
Shocker, Scorpion and White Dragon open fire, but Menace took out her plasma weapon and fired at Scorpion, then took out her pumpkin bomb and threw it at White Dragon. Causing it to explode, both Scorpion and White Dragon were injured with Shocker on the ground with a partly damaged gauntlet
Shocker:No! Not now!
Menace:It's over!
Shocker:Dammit!
Seeing this, Doctor Octopus knocked back Spider-Man and intervened as he knocked back Menace
Shocker:I owe you Doc
Doctor Octopus:We need to leave now before we attract too more attention. Vulture!
Vulture:I'm still here!
Doctor Octopus:Grab whatever you can salvage from the briefcase and carry White Dragon out with it
Vulture carries White Dragon and took some of the tube containers that are not damaged with him, and Doctor Octopus carries Shocker and Scorpion and left. Spider-Man got up and sees them leaving
Spider-Man:Ow! What the!?
Doctor Octopus:Apologies Arachnid! But we'll have to do this another time!
Spider-Man:No. No you won't!
As he sees Doctor Octopus leaving, Spider-Man went to go after him until Menace appeared and grabbed him as she took him in the air
Spider-Man:Agh! Who!?
Menace:My boss also said that if I ever see you then I would have to put you down!
Spider-Man:Like that's ever gonna happen!
Menace:That's why I wanna talk to you!
Spider-Man:What!?
While still in mid-air, Diamondback is seen on one of the buildings and watched Spider-Man and Menace with interest
Diamondback:So, you're fighting Spider-Man? Well that too early on your first assignment but this would be interesting. Well you better do as you are told young lady
Spider-Man and Menaceare still in the air as they'renear theNew YorkChemical Plant
Spider-Man:You wanna talk to me!? After what you did back there!?
Menace:You don't understand!
Spider-Man:What's not to understand!? You murdered that guy!
Menace:I have no other choice!
Spider-Man:There is always a choice! But this is literally screwed up!
Spider-Man broke free from Menace's grip as he fired his web-bullets at her, but as he web-swings Menace used the opportunity and fired her pumpkin bombs at him as it explodes
New YorkChemical Plant: Inside
The explosion caused Spider-Man to crash inside the Chemical Plant, with the employees watching it happened as they ran away
Spider-Man:Ow… That hurts (That bomb. That's one of Green Goblin's bombs, but how'd she get it?)
As Spider-Man got up, Menace enters and brought out her Flaming Sword as she watches him in the air. Spider-Man watches her and wonders something about her
Spider-Man:(It's not just that. During our fight she didn't even made an effort to kill me. And that blast, she could have timed it precisely to impact the damage, but she made it so I'm not badly hurt. And her voice… something about it seems… familiar)
Menace:Are you ready to give up!? Or would I have to make it worse!
Spider-Man:If you can actually make it worse!
Menace:What?
Spider-Man:All this time we've been fighting, you've never put an effort. You didn't even try to kill me! What's going on!?
Menace:That's not important!
Spider-Man:I'm afraid it is! You said you have no choice right!? You're in trouble aren't you!? So you're forced into doing something you're not!
Menace:…
Spider-Man:… You don't need to do this! If you're in trouble then maybe I can help you! It's not too late for you to back down!
Menace:… It's too late for me, but it's not too late for you!
Spider-Man:Nothing is too late! Whatever problem you got I can help!
Menace:Listen to me; they're ordering me to kill you! They will know what I'm doing! So I'm begging you to please lay low for a while for this to blow over.
Spider-Man:Blow over!?
Menace:… There's going to be a war raging soon in New York! Once it's over then you can do whatever you want! So please just pretend you're dead and lay low for a while!
Spider-Man:… That would mean people would die! And that's something I can't live with!
Menace:Please Spider-Man!
Spider-Man:Sorry… but I can't!
Menace:… Then I would just have to CRIPPLE YOU ENOUGH TO PUT YOU OUT OF COMMISION!
Menace attacked Spider-Man with full force while managing to restrain herself as she fired her pumpkin bombs and moved in to strike Spider-Man, but he evaded her attacks and knocked her back on the ground. The fight has caused the generator to over heat as fire starts to erupt. Back to the fight, Spider-Man landed on the ground as Menace threw razor wings at him, whom he avoided but she then swings her sword in order to land a hit
Spider-Man:You're not making this any easier for yourself!
Menace:I'm not trying to!
Menace knocked him back but Spider-Man manages to counter her attack and knocked her back to the ground. As Menace gets up with some injury Spider-Man landed on the ground to try to persuade her
Spider-Man:Listen to me Menace, I know you're not a bad person, I can see that!
Menace:Just stop!
Spider-Man:But if you are in trouble then I can help!
Menace:Please!
Spider-Man:Let me help you! Trust me!
Menace:JUST STOP!
Spider-Man:…
Menace:… You are a good person Spider-Man. I know that because you once saved me! And that's what I'm doing now! To save you! Or else they would get me! Please!
Spider-Man hears sadness in Menace's voice as he tries to reach out
Spider-Man:… I know what you're going though, and believe me I was there
Menace:Huh!?
Spider-Man:But you don't need to punish yourself for whatever mistakes you did! Because if you do then you will never be free, because it will always come back to haunt you for the rest of your life! Don't make the same mistake I did or else it will eat you alive inside!
Menace:… Spider-Man
Spider-Man:And so I'm asking you this! Let me help you!
Menace:I… I can't
Spider-Man:Yes you can
Spider-Man then approached her and offers his hand, as Menace looked with surprise
Menace:…
Spider-Man:… You said I saved you before, so then let me save you again. Please… let me save you
Menace:…
While hesitated, a saddened Menace slowly reaches out to him, as Spider-Man watches in relief, but suddenly and explosion occurred as the entire Chemical Plant is in fire
Spider-Man:Oh no!
Menace:The plant! It's going to explode!
Spider-Man:I'll get the workers out! You clear a path!
Menace:What!? But-
Spider-Man:Menace! I need you! Please
Menace:… Alright
As they proceed, Spider-Man swings in to rescues all of the workers while Menace used her Flaming Sword to clear a path to an exit, while the fire gets bigger. With nearly everyone out, they both see one worker left
Menace:There's one more!
Spider-Man:I got it!
Spider-Man swings in to rescue the worker but Spider-Man sees the debris falling onto him
Menace:LOOK OUT!
Spider-Man:Oh no!
Without time to think, Spider-Man threw the worker away as the debris crashed on him
Spider-Man:AGH!
Menace:SPIDER-MAN!
With the last worker outside, Menace went in to help Spider-Man as she tries to remove the debris except it was too heavy
Spider-Man:Ugh. I'm stuck
Menace:HANG ON! I CAN GET YOU OUT! (Menace raised her Flaming Sword) HERE GOES!
Spider-Man:LOOK OUT!
Menace:HUH!?
Just then, more debris crashed in and further buried Spider-Man
Menace:No! No! No! NO!
Spider-Man:Agh!
Menace:Hang on! I can still get you out! (Menace puts away her Flaming Sword) Just hang on! (She starts digging through the rubble) I can get you out!
Spider-Man:Ugh. Don't think that's going to be an option
Menace:I'M GOING TO GET YOU OUT! I CAN STILL GET YOU OUT!
As Menace digs through she manages to pull an injured Spider-Man out of the debris
Spider-Man:Ow
Menace:I… I saved you
Spider-Man:Yeah. Yeah you did!
Menace:Heh…
Suddenly, the portion of the plant exploded as the fire gets bigger and realizes they are both trapped
Spider-Man:Uh, this sucks
Menace:I… I can get you out. We'll get out
Spider-Man:Yeah. Only one of us will
Menace:What?
Spider-Man:… I'm sorry
Menace:(Punch) Ugh!
With his remaining strength, Spider-Man punched Menace to the stomach and leaving her in pain as it left her in shock that he would do this
Menace:… Wha… Why?
Spider-Man:… You said I saved you before, and I'm gonna save you again!
Menace:… No… No!
Spider-Man used his webbing on Menace and threw her towards the exit as the fire engulfed the Plant. As Menace got up, she witness Spider-Man in horror as he appeared trapped as the fire got bigger and the surroundings started to collapse
Menace:NO! SPIDER-MAN NO!
Suddenly, the entire Chemical Plant blew up as a massive explosion occurred, with Menace being blasted out from the building. But as she got up, a shocked Menace realized what she has done in horror and tears by what has happened as she could not believe what she has done. Menace killed Spider-Man
Menace:… No… No!… NOOO!
AUTHOR'S NOTE: This just in, Spider-Man is dead… or is he?
At least Spider-Man tried to convince Menace, only for this to happen
Also here we have Debra Whitman as this version's Scorpion, who then kills Miles Warren. I really do not like Miles, so sod it he's gone, while Dr. Octopus has what he needs for his plans. The Cross-Species is something everyone would recognize from the Amazing Spider-Man movie, except this version has nanites in them for Otto to control. Like in Superior Spider-Man Team-Up were he control the former members of the Sinister Six
What happens from this point, you will have to wait
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