Chapter 5
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5: The Visitor
REVIEW'S RESPONSE:
Rider Paladin: The part with Silver Sable is exactly what I'm trying to go for, but how I'm gonna do it will take time as I need to develop her character further
MisterKo: I know you love the PeterXGwen pair and believe me I've been a huge fan of that pair in the series because I just like that version of Gwen more then the comic version, but there's been so many here that it just seem pointless to do the same theme when you know how it ends or how you wanted it to end, and it's been done many times with the same girls and we know how it goes and so for that matter he needs a change with somebody new. It's a slow build but I'm developing the story and the characters first before I get to develop Kate Bishop's character. As for Gwen herself, well I have some ideas but I won't spoil it
Forest Hill, Queens
Peter Parker was seen walking his way towards home until he was spotted my Mary Jane Watson
Mary Jane Watson:Peter!
Peter Parker:Mary Jane?
Mary Jane Watson:Hey wait up!
Mary Jane ran towards Peter, who appeared to be slightly upset
Mary Jane Watson:Glad I caught you Peter! We need to talk
Peter Parker:What is it?
Mary Jane Watson:What happened today? Gwen sounded upset when I saw her, and even Harry looked down
Peter Parker:…
Mary Jane Watson:Peter. What's going on?
Peter Parker:… I rather not talk about it
Mary Jane Watson:Well guess what, we are having this talk whether you like it or not
Peter Parker:…
Mary Jane Watson:When I heard from Glory about what happened, I just need to know
Peter Parker:… What's there to tell
Mary Jane Watson:Peter, what happened to you?
Peter Parker:…
Mary Jane Watson:Please… you can tell me
Peter Parker:… What can I say huh? How can I even say it, that I just don't like hanging around with them anymore?
Mary Jane Watson:… If you said that then I don't believe you
Peter Parker:Why?
Mary Jane Watson:Because that is not what you do and I know you well enough to know that
Peter Parker:Alright fine, you wanna know?
Mary Jane Watson:Yes
Peter Parker:Okay then. Has every decision I've made have been one wrong move after another?
Mary Jane Watson:What?
Peter Parker:Has every action I've done meant nothing that I keep screwing up?
Mary Jane Watson:Where does that come from?
Peter Parker:I don't know, you tell me!
Mary Jane Watson:…
Peter Parker:When you first met me, what was I to you?
Mary Jane Watson:Peter
Peter Parker:Be honest with me MJ
Mary Jane Watson:… When I first met you I see you as just another guy my Aunt wants me to hook up, but ever since I've known you I see you as just this real nice guy
Peter Parker:A nice guy that keeps making bad decisions after another
Mary Jane Watson:A nice guy that wants to do good and help, and why do you even ask me that anyway? Is it because it's hard to admit you need help!? Is it because of the fact that you've been working to hard so that you can take care of your Aunt May!? Or because you still felt guilty for what happened with Liz!?
Peter Parker:…
Mary Jane Watson:It's because you still haven't gotten over the fact that Gwen is not with you isn't it?
Peter Parker:… I'm not talking about it
Mary Jane Watson:It's Gwen we're talking about isn't it Peter! The girl who's been in love with you since kindergarten, the girl you had a crush on since you've realized how much you meant to her, the girl who was prepared to leave Harry for you until his Dad died, and the fact that you still haven't got over the fact that she's with him and not you!
Peter Parker:…
Mary Jane Watson:What was she suppose to do Peter!? He needed her, and what were you even thinking blurting out like that on Harry's face!? Especially when you were talking about his Dad like that!? The guy who's been your friend since the 4th grade and he was perhaps the only friend you've got! So yeah fine I admit Harry does have his faults, but he's still your friend!
Peter Parker:He was my best friend MJ! He use to be a year ago since his father's death and he's been distant from me that we've never spoken much to the point were I barely knew him! I tried to be a better friend to him, but he pushes me away because he thinks I'm a threat to him!
Mary Jane Watson:Why would you think that!?
Peter Parker:Because he knew that Gwen was going to leave Harry for me!
Mary Jane Watson:… What…?
Peter Parker:… He knew… He knew that Gwen was in love with me and when she was going to leave him he would lose to me so that would believe that his own father was right about his this whole time. So he used his father's death to make Gwen feel guilty enough for her to stay with him, and that for the first time in his life I get to be the nobody instead of him!
Mary Jane Watson:…
Peter Parker:I had my suspicions about him, but I figured it out later on that he knew and I know it was the most obvious thing he would do. He was threaten by me so I tried to be a better friend for him, I tried to forget the whole thing and go back to the way things were before, I even tried to joke about the whole thing and how stupid it is! But you know what, I can't because it's like I'm running away from it! Running away from my own problems when I know I can't just ignore it! Running away from the fact that my own best friend alienated me because it makes him feel better then everyone else! Always talking about how rich he is and that he can afford things! How everyone unimportant to him meant nothing! I was the guy he was dragging along! Someone he can shove it to my face and say that he's the better person than me! That he has the money, he has the popularity, and most of all he has the girl! The girl I was supposed to be with! And you know what else; Gwen didn't even bother telling me that she would rather be my friend again and just forget everything that has happened! She didn't even bother saying it directly to me!
Mary Jane Watson:She doesn't even know how, heck she felt guilty for what happen to Liz. Gwen think she made you broke up with her, and she doesn't even know how to fix this
Peter Parker:And is that a good enough excuse?
Mary Jane Watson:…
Peter Parker:I needed her support she wasn't there because she was taking care of the sad person who lost his own Dad, and it hurt me because it made me feel that she was forced to abandoned me knowing what would happen if she did. It took me for a while and I realize he stopped being my best friend for a long time, and so I was suppose to be with doesn't want to be with me anymore. So I just stopped caring. Stop caring what everybody else thinks
Mary Jane Watson:They've been with you since you were little kids! Hell they were with you since your Uncle Ben died! They've even been with you since your Aunt May was sick! So yeah they've not been there with you for almost a year, but they started talking to you again. They talk to you because they missed you and they want you back into their lives!
Peter Parker:So what you just told them what I do with my job!? Is that the reason why they've started talking to me again?
Mary Jane Watson:…
Peter Parker:… Why did you tell her about it? Why did you tell Gwen about my assignments
Mary Jane Watson:Because this is insane… What you're doing right now?
Peter Parker:…
Mary Jane Watson:… When your Aunt May visited my house to talk to my Aunt Anna I overheard them about your job and how dangerous it keeps on getting and yet you still take them just for the extra money, but she knows there's something else and I actually agree with her
Peter Parker:… You really didn't have to tell her that
Mary Jane Watson:Well I did and you know why? Because you are worrying me. You worried me because this is something you would never ever do. The Peter Parker I knew would never do something like this and that scared me because I don't even wanna think what would happened to you
Peter Parker:… You still shouldn't have told them
Mary Jane Watson:Yes I do, because you're my best friend Peter and you deserve to be happy. I want you to be happy. So yeah me telling them might be the reason why stop being a jerk to you and Gwen wanted to talk to you again, but you know the reason why they started talking to you because deep down they really miss you and want you back. They want you back in their lives
Peter Parker:…
Mary Jane Watson:… You've been like a brother to me Peter. You've been such an amazing guy and it would sicken me if there was a world without you. I just want things to go back the way they were, so why can you just accept it? Why can't you be happy?
Peter Parker:… You wanted to know the truth? The truth is not being with them… has started to make me think. Think about what I've been doing up until this point, and It was only recently that they've started talking to me, see if I wanted to hang out with them again. It was a slow build but they've wanted to mend our broken friendship, seeing if things can go back to the way things was, and even Harry is starting to become open about it. But the truth is… if me coming back into their lives would be much worse then walking out of it
Mary Jane Watson:What?
Peter Parker:I'm the person that always made a mistake. I was the person that makes the decisions without thinking. I was the person that was careless and I wonder what would happened if I did go back into their lives. So the truth is MJ is that they would be better off if I was never a part of their lives because I know there would be a moment I would make things worse. I would make things hard and perhaps Gwen would suffer for my mistake
Mary Jane Watson:… Is that why you shunned your two best friends off?
Peter Parker:It's better this way… and you did say I worry you. Worry you this much that you would tell them. I just want them to be happy together, but to do that would mean I have to completely disappear from their lives… and I'm okay with it. I'm okay with being the guy that they use to know
Mary Jane Watson:… Peter…
Peter Parker:You can't convince me MJ. Not this time. I can't just make up things and expect things to go back the way they were. And I certainly can ruin whatever chance Gwen has with Harry. This was meant to be, and nothing more can change that… Please…
Mary Jane Watson:…
Seeing him display a sad face, Mary Jane then approached and hugged Peter tightly out of sympathy. Hearing that he would give up Gwen for her to be with Harry
Peter Parker:Mary Jane!?
Mary Jane Watson:… I met Mark last week
Peter Parker:Huh?
Mary Jane Watson:I never told my Mom, I never told my Dad, I never told my sister or my Aunt Anna. I just went there without them knowing. Went to Ryker Penitentiary and I just met him, even thought my parents still forbid me I still went to see him. And he was so happy to see me just I was happy to see him. We talked about things we haven't talked about for a while. He asked how my acting is going, and I said it was going great. I even ask that if he gets out that we would go on a date, and he laughed abit, until he asked if my folks knew I was there. That's when he started to get serious. He told me not to see him anymore. That it was his addiction that got him in to this. That he didn't even knew what he got himself into. And most of all he doesn't want me dragged in his mess because he's afraid that I would ruin whatever chance I have at making as an Actress, and that he shouldn't be a burden to me. I told him he's not a burden and that we can make this work. But he told me how we can be together if he's now a body of fire. As the Molten Man, and the fear of his powers killing me. I tried desperately to convince him, but you know what he told me? Move on
Peter Parker:…
Mary Jane Watson:… He told me that he will always love me, but he can't be with me because he is Molten Man. A criminal. A monster. A villain. He told me to move on and focus on my acting. Make a life out of it, and also told me… to be happy with someone else. And then he said goodbye
Noticing a tear in her eye, Peter then hugged Mary Jane out of sympathy as she held him tightly
Peter Parker:… Mary Jane…
Mary Jane Watson:… I don't know what to do Peter. I don't even know how I can ever move on. Mark was like the most amazing guy I've ever met and the fact that I'm not with him just kills me! Just… how could this have happen? How can one mistake can ruin your life like this
Peter Parker:…
Mary Jane Watson:… How Peter? How can you just… move on like that? Knowing you love Gwen and you would just give her up!? How!?
Peter Parker:… It's just wasn't mean to be. Life can throw you a lot of things, but in time… you just know it's never gonna work out good because we're being selfish. I let my friends go because they'll be better together as a couple. Because I know that if I come back into their lives then things would get complicated. Mark is probably thinking the same thing
Mary Jane Watson:…
Peter Parker:He was just doing what's best for you, because once you get involved into things easily then it'll be harder to get out. You will never break free from it. And no matter how many times you tried to bury your mistakes it will always haunt you for the rest of your life
Mary Jane Watson:… How would you know that?
Peter Parker:… I don't
Mary Jane Watson:… It's not fair…
Peter Parker:… I know… It never is…
Peter and Mary Jane looked at each other while they let go
Peter Parker:…
Mary Jane Watson:…
Peter Parker:… You wanna come over to my house? My Aunt May's making cake
Mary Jane Watson:… I like cake
While the two walked towards near his house, Peter and Mary Jane notice expensive looking cars surrounding his house
Peter Parker:What the!?
Mary Jane Watson:What's going on?
Peter Parker:(Spider-Sense) What the?
Just as he turns, he grabs the hand of a young Asian woman appeared behind him as she was about to place her hand on him. Surprising her as well as Mary Jane
Peter Parker:…
Mary Jane Watson:Huh
Meiko Yin:I'm impressed. You were aware of my presence as I approach
Peter Parker:What?
Mary Jane Watson:Who… are…?
Meiko Yin:My name is Meiko Yin and I work on behalf of Miss Manfredi. I believe you know her as CEO of Silver Incorporated
Peter Parker:(Manfredi!? Sable Manfredi!? Oh no!) Um
Meiko Yin:And you young lady
Mary Jane Watson:Huh?
Meiko Yin:I suggest you leave now
Mary Jane Watson:What!? Wait! Who are you to tell me-
Meiko Yin:Don't… make this any harder. This is purely a discussion and my employer would like to speak with him in private. Or would you rather have a… accidental incident to happen?
Peter Parker:… Change of plans. MJ, go back home
Mary Jane Watson:Huh!? But Peter?
Peter Parker:I'll be fine. Just go. I'll see you later
Mary Jane Watson:…
Mary Jane went back home as Peter stood in front of Meiko
Meiko Yin:I trust they'll be no interruptions
Peter Parker:My Aunt May
Meiko Yin:Your relative is fine as Miss Manfredi is with her now, but failure to comply
Peter Parker:I get that
Meiko Yin:Then you would accompany me inside
Peter Parker:… Alright…
The two head towards the house as Peter worries what has happened to his Aunt May after finding out Sable Manfredi is inside with her
Peter Parker:(What do I do, what the hell do I do? Sable is here and Aunt May is inside with her. Probably with guys carrying guns. Man why did I have to save her from that Beetle guy? Have to play this through and find out what she want)
Meiko Yin:Problem Mr. Parker?
Peter Parker:No… Nothing at all (But if you guys hurt my Aunt May)
Parker House
Peter went inside with Meiko and was surprised by seeing armed men in expensive suits and eating cake, but also seeing his Aunt May enjoying company with a woman she'd recognize. Sable Manfredi
May Parker:My my. This man you spoke of seems to be a handful doesn't he?
Sable Manfredi:Heh, you have no idea
May Parker:I remember my late husband was like that in my younger days. Some men are always like that
Sable Manfredi:I bet they do, but with him and me it just shows why it didn't work, which made it difficult for a personal relationship
May Parker:But you are beautiful dear. I do not know the reason why any man should not be interested in you, and if the next man comes to you then you need to show who's what
Sable Manfredi:Hehehe. Awe, you are sweet Mrs. Parker, but as you know my career right now comes first and that would be challenging
May Parker:Well I admire your independents dear, but that is no excuse for an elegant young lady such as yourself to not to find someone suitable for you, and it took me a long time until I found the one man suitable for me
Sable Manfredi:Heh. I can see that but they are hard to come by these days
May Parker:That I understand. No matter the year it always the same
Sable Manfredi:Indeed
Peter Parker:(… What… the?)
Henchmen 1:Mrs. Parker, can I have more cake please?
May Parker:Of course dear. It's in the kitchen
Henchmen 1:Thank you Mrs. Parker
Henchmen 2:I'm getting some too
Henchmen 3:Same here
Sable Manfredi:Behave you three. We are only guest here
May Parker:My it must be hard doing this
Sable Manfredi:A loyal bunch, but hard to manage
Peter Parker:Aunt May!?
Meiko Yin:Miss Manfredi. He is here
May Parker:Oh Peter you're back!
Sable Manfredi:Ah, thank you Yin, and we meet again Mr. Peter Parker
Peter Parker:Oh, hello (Okay, Sable Manfredi and her men are in my house fully armed with guns, who are talking to Aunt May and eating cake… what the hell just happened?)
May Parker:Well don't just stand there, come and join us
Sable Manfredi:Yes Mr. Parker sit. We have a lot to talk about
Unsure what has happened, Peter sat down next to his Aunt May and facing Sable Manfredi
Peter Parker:What's… going on?
May Parker:Young Miss Manfredi and I were just having a chat dear, but she also came here to see you
Peter Parker:Wait. You came here to see me?
Sable Manfredi:Yes Peter. As you remember a few days back you saved me from the Beetle and I wanted to thank you in person
Peter Parker:… Oh (Is that what it's about?)
May Parker:Peter! Why didn't you tell me about this!?
Peter Parker:Uh, well I didn't wanna make a big deal out of it
Sable Manfredi:Heh. How modest of you. You raised him well Mrs. Parker
May Parker:I do what I can dear
Sable Manfredi:Well I wish there was more modest men like him
May Parker:I would too, and perhaps a very handsome to treat a strong beautiful woman like yourself right
Sable Manfredi:Hehe, you flatter me Mrs. Parker
May Parker:Oh please, call me May
Sable Manfredi:Heh. Alright May, and I must say you are just a delight
May Parker:And you Miss Manfredi are just a joy to have
Sable Manfredi:Thank you, and please call me Sable
Peter Parker:(… Okay seriously what's going on? How the heck did these two became close all of a sudden?) Um, what this about?
Sable Manfredi:Oh I apologize. Back to the matter, I wish to repay you in person for that brave act you've displayed Mr. Parker
Peter Parker:Repay me? How?
Sable Manfredi:With whatever you like. I'll even willing to pay you money, including extra for the lovely hospitality your sweet Aunt provided
Peter Parker:… Uh. That… isn't necessary
Sable Manfredi:Oh
Peter Parker:I mean I didn't do it for the money or anything I just wanted to help out, and I saw you in trouble so I just jumped in to help
Meiko Yin:I'd advice you that you to take it and not reject her offer
Sable Manfredi:It's alright Yin. It's not everyday a man would turn down a large sum of money or anything for that matter
May Parker:Well Peter is being modest
Sable Manfredi:I agree, but I still would like to repay you
Peter Parker:Um… simple thanks would be enough
Sable Manfredi:Heh, that very selfless of you, except it doesn't compare to the brave act you've committed that day, especially someone at your age. So you sure there is nothing I can offer you?
Peter Parker:Well there's technically nothing I want from you, so… no. I'm sorry
Sable Manfredi:I understand.
May Parker:Don't take no offence from it dear. He's just being polite
Sable Manfredi:Not at all, infact I respect it. Peter is a man of principle that seeks to build his own future from scratch and I can respect that. I myself have to build my business from scratch and now I have expanded. Perhaps that's the one trait we both share
Peter Parker:Um, yeah I guess
Sable Manfredi:But I still owe you, so if you change your mind Mr. Parker then I might have something for you. Here's my card
Sable hands Peter her card with her number on the back
Peter Parker:Um, what's this?
Sable Manfredi:An offer Mr. Parker, to work in my company
Peter Parker:What?
Sable Manfredi:My business is expanding Peter and I'm looking to hire those with the skills to provide the kind of service I need, and I can give you such opportunity to work if you desire. The payment will be good but since you are studying in school, as education is still an important factor, you can work for me in whatever time you feel like it. Just don't do anything that would affect your education or else I'd might regret it
Peter Parker:Oh. I see (Seriously? Just like that?)
Sable Manfredi:Problem Mr. Parker?
Peter Parker:No! No I'm just… surprised that you consider me for this. I mean I just saved you and… Seriously I wasn't expecting this
Sable Manfredi:So are you interested Mr. Parker?
Peter Parker:Um, I'll think about it
Sable Manfredi:I hope you do
The three got up as Sable prepare to depart
Sable Manfredi:Well its time I go
May Parker:Thank you for coming and it's very lovely to have you here dear
Sable Manfredi:It's very lovely to meet you Mrs. Parker, and I hope to see you again. I so enjoy your company. And you
Peter Parker:Yeah?
Sable Manfredi:Thank you for saving my life and I hope to hear from you soon
Peter and Sable both shake hands
Sable Manfredi:Until then Peter Parker
Meiko Yin:It is a pleasure to meet you Parker and to you Miss
May Parker:Thank you, and my you're lovely dear
Meiko Yin:… Thank you…
Henchmen 1:Thanks for the cake
Henchmen 2:It was delicious
Henchmen 3:Nice to meet you Mrs. Parker
May Parker:My pleasure young man
Peter and May saw Sable entering the vehicle as they drove off from their house. The two went inside the house as Peter is still in confusion as to what happen
May Parker:Well that's very nice of them to come, and you didn't mention any of this to me?
Peter Parker:How did they know where we live?
May Parker:They said they called the Bugle about where you are
Peter Parker:… Seriously? (Oh come on! Does the Bugle really need to give my details to Silvermane's daughter!? Typical of you Pickle-Puss for making deals with the devil) So did they say anything since they got here?
May Parker:Well they did offer to pay off some of our bills, which I thought would help since I'll be focusing my time with my new cook-book
Peter Parker:What!?
May Parker:I thought it would lift some of the burden, and it's not like they're going to do anything. Sable and her men are quite charming to have around.
Peter Parker:You call her Sable now?
May Parker:Relax Peter, she's been lovely. Well I hope they can come again for desert
Peter Parker:(If they did something to hurt Aunt May then I would have made a much bigger mistake, but at least they didn't do anything to hurt her. Power to the cake I guess, but for them to meet me? Looks like I need to be more careful (Peter looked at the card Sable gave) And this I need to figure out what to do next)
Outside Queens
Heading back to Manhattan, Sable in one of the cars, with Meiko, was thinking about Peter and what she thinks of him
Meiko Yin:(On phone with employers) I see, so it arrives… Very well… We'll place an order for them soon, but make sure our payments are on time… Good (Meiko hangs up phone) Our business partners from China are delighted with the merchandise they've received. They'll be expecting another shipment soon
Sable Manfredi:…
Meiko Yin:… Mistress?
Sable Manfredi:… What you think of Peter Parker?
Meiko Yin:Excuse me?
Sable Manfredi:That young man. What do you think of him?
Meiko Yin:… I find him to be… modest, polite even. You don't meet people like that much
Sable Manfredi:I notice that and it's a rarity that someone like him exists, and then there's May Parker, who I really enjoy talking to. Reminded me of my nanny at a young age… and not to mention my own mother
Meiko Yin:…
Sable Manfredi:… What else do we have on him besides the usual?
Meiko Yin:According to the information his parents both died in a plane crash while he was still 5 years old. He lost his Uncle name Ben Parker over a year ago, and they appear to be struggling in some financial debt, which they are slowly paying off thanks to Mrs. Parker's cook-book, and lately the young man's photos for the Bugle of that masked man
Sable Manfredi:Spider-Man. He was an eye-soar to have, but for Peter to take pictures of him?
Meiko Yin:He appeared to be in need of money to ease off their debt. He appears to be working hard for the sake of his Aunt May
Sable Manfredi:I notice that too, which I actually like about him. A young man putting his own family first, but I also notice something else in him
Meiko Yin:…
Sable Manfredi:The look on his eyes. I see a growing anxiety in his eyes. I also see stress in him, doubt, worry, fear, anger, and something else I've notice but I can't pointed out… He appears to be carrying some sort of burden. A mounting pressure building up on his shoulder. To think he carried that amount of duty in that age
Meiko Yin:… I also notice something else also. One I'm quite surprised
Sable Manfredi:Oh? And what are you so surprised about him?
Meiko Yin:When I approached him, he appeared to have noticed my presence before I've made my move. No one has notice my presence before, but when he grabbed my hand I notice something else. His strength
Sable Manfredi:His strength?
Meiko Yin:He's strong Mistress. Not like those I've encountered before, but he is strong and he appears to be holding back. He's hiding his real strength from us. I also notice his figure and I know he's fully built, but he does not appear to show it
Sable Manfredi:So he's strong, but he's hiding his real strength?
Meiko Yin:I do know what to think about him Mistress, but I see something that has my interest, and I am rarely interested
Sable Manfredi:I can see that. To think that you would express interest meaning he might actually posses something that is of worth to us
Meiko Yin:He might be skilled but if trained properly he would become a capable fighter. One I think would benefit us
Sable Manfredi:Is that right?
Meiko Yin:He could be useful to have if he accepts; especially now we know someone is coming after your life
Sable Manfredi:… So a gang war is really coming this way and someone's after my head
Meiko Yin:We need all the capabilities to counter our enemies, but we don't know yet of our enemies strength. He on the other hand might
Sable Manfredi:You really think you can train him?
Meiko Yin:I was known as the Dragonfly Mistress, and I know a skilled fighter when I see one. And if done properly, Peter Parker could very well be an exception warrior
Sable Manfredi:… Then I hope he better call, because I don't want to loose someone like him to anyone else
New York Police Department
With today's incident being discussed, Officer Jean DeWolff is on her table in doubt as Sergeant Stan Carter appeared and brought her coffee
Jean DeWolff:Stan?
Stan Carter:Here. Brought you some coffee
Jean DeWolff:… Thanks
Stan Carter:You alright?
Jean DeWolff:… How our guys doing
Stan Carter:Injured but stable. They're gonna be in a hospital bed for a while
Jean DeWolff:…
Stan Carter:… He saved Captain Stacy's life you know
Jean DeWolff:… I know, but I'm just getting frustrated. We never had much of this kind of problem before. Now this job is getting much harder to handle, and with the Big Man being expose as the guy we once protected Spider-Man from… I don't even think we are upholding the law anymore
Stan Carter:It takes time Jean. You just have to wait
Vin Gonzales:You guys don't even know the half of it
Fellow officer Vin Gonzales appeared with another fellow of Hispanic decent. His sister Michelle Gonzales
Stan Carter:Hey there Vin
Jean DeWolff:Who's the new blood with you?
Vin Gonzales:Everyone, this is my sister Michelle. Michelle, this is Stan Carter and Jean DeWolff
Michelle Gonzales:It's a pleasure to meet you both
Jean DeWolff:Like wise
Stan Carter:That's your sister Vin? She's too pretty to be a cop
Michelle Gonzales:Keep talking wise-ass
Jean DeWolff:Relax girl, he's with me
Stan Carter:Hey, but seriously Vin I didn't think you have a sister
Michelle Gonzales:Vin here doesn't say a lot
Stan Carter:He wishes
Jean DeWolff:So you're new?
Michelle Gonzales:Been in the force for few months. Just transferred here due to the force requesting extra hands
Jean DeWolff:No kidding, after what just happened today
Stan Carter:Yeah
Vin Gonzales:Well we better get to it then, so we'll be heading off
Michelle Gonzales:It's nice meeting you two
Jean DeWolff:Pleasure meeting you
Stan Carter:Hey welcome to the force Michelle, but you better make sure nothing wrong with that face
Michelle Gonzales:Bite me wise-ass
Vin Gonzales:That's my sister you're talking to
Stan Carter:Hey I'm just messing with you guys
Vin Gonzales:Nice try jack-ass
Michelle Gonzales:Heh
Both Vin and Michelle left the two as Stan and Jean talk
Jean DeWolff:You think she's pretty?
Stan Carter:I'm just trying to make the new girl feel welcome here
Jean DeWolff:Yeah right
Stan Carter:Come on Jean you know me
Jean DeWolff:Yeah right
Stan Carter:Jean I'm serious. Listen once our shift ends, we go out and grab a cup of coffee. How's that sound?
Jean DeWolff:What?
Stan Carter:Yeah. You and me outside the uniform, just the two of us
Jean was slightly surprised that she heard it from Stan's own mouth. That her own partner would consider it
Jean DeWolff:… Is this a date?
Stan Carter:We're getting coffee aren't we?
Jean DeWolff:…
Stan Carter:Interested?
Jean DeWolff:… Yeah… Yeah why not
George Stacy enters the building as he's now meeting with other officers from different district. Among them Captain Frank Quaid
George Stacy:I see they still drag your sorry ass
Frank Quaid:No more than yours
George Stacy:It's good to see you again Frank
Frank Quaid:Same here George. How's the family?
George Stacy:Doing great
Frank Quaid:Good to here
George Stacy:So we're discussing the briefing?
Frank Quaid:Not yet. Some others are still coming in here
George Stacy:So who else showed up?
?:Why that will be me
George became surprised as he recognized a familiar face he once cared for. Yuri Watanabe
George Stacy:Yuri?
Yuri Watanabe:Hello George.
George Stacy:Oh my god Yuri!
Both George and Yuri happily hug
Yuri Watanabe:I miss you George
George Stacy:I missed you too Yuri, and you look amazing
Yuri Watanabe:And I see you're still as handsome as ever
Frank Quaid:Keep your freak on girl. This ain't the academy no more
George Stacy:So you're part of this meeting
Frank Quaid:She's more then that brother. Yuri's Captain now
George Stacy:Really?
Yuri Watanabe:Yeah
Frank Quaid:And that's not all you've been paired with her
George Stacy:What?
Yuri Watanabe:You handsome man are looking at your new partner
AUTHOR'S NOTE: May the cake be with us
As what happened in chapter 2 and the lot that are at the end of chapter 3 is the result. Here we have Sable offering Peter a job in her organization, but will he take it? That you will have to wait and see
Here we have the introduction to Meiko Yin, who first appeared in "Amazing Spider-Man issue 421". Here she works for Sable Manfredi and will play a role in this later on in the story
Another are characters I'm adding for George Stacy. Frank Quaid first appeared in "Ultimate Spider-Man issue 110", and here he was once George's Watanabe first appeared in"Amazing Spider-Man issue 600" and you know her as the "Wraith", but in this version she has a very close and personal history with George Stacy as I will reveal later on in the story, but I can tell you guys can figure out what it is
It's a slow process but what I'm doing right now is slowly build the characters and the stories for a later plot and some of the characters I'll put on later will have a role in it. Some of it will be bad and some I haven't even figured out yet, but it's getting somewhere as it will take time
Speaking of characters, next chapter will involve the role of Gwen Stacy and her part in the story. It's something I've wanted to try out when I've thought of the idea so prepare for what I'm about to do to her. I know one of you will
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