The Spectacular Peter Parker

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A year since the downfall of the Green Goblin, Peter Parker is continuing his crime-fighting career as Spider-Man, but what has happen along the way will not only make him get involved in a world he was never expecting but become part of something he never thought he would be in. This story was removed, OA is Silentman87 and story is discontinued.
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Warning: I do not own Spider-Man, nor this Story.

This story deserves to be available for readers to read. This Story was removed, it deserved to be available, Original Author is Silentman87 as i don't own this story or its work.

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2: The Beetle

REVIEW'S RESPONSE:

MisterKo: Thanks, and yeah I was thinking about a Peter X Gwen/MJ story for this, but nearly every fanfiction here already did that and it has been done many times in nearly ever Spider-Man media. So I'm putting in a new girl for Peter outside his own supporting cast

Guest: Kate Bishop is going to be developed into a love interest in the future, but not immediately as I need to deal with the other girls in Peters life before I can develop the relationship

Kyuubi-Titan : They're villain. They don't give a damn, they're going to do what they do best and just beat the crap out of Spidey

Somewhere in New York

In an old building inside is an elderly Rastafarian woman in red clothing with a white spider symbol on her chest and wearing sunglasses meditates with scented candles flowing around the room, until a small spider appeared as the elderly lady placed her hand on the floor as the spider climbed up

?:So… da weava has spoken. Now mi role will soon begun

Hilton Towers: Dining Hall

Back in one of New York's Sky Scraper, the event is still taking place with word the host will make her appearance soon, with Pete readying his camera

J. Jonah Jameson:Parker!

Peter Parker:I'm here!

J. Jonah Jameson:Good! Now get in the front and give me some shots! Lee! Make sure every words are on that tape of yours

Peter Parker:I'll do my best

Ned Lee:I'm on it

Peter went on front to get the best shots as Mayor Jillian Waters took stage, but also saw the Bishop family as Kate saw Peter and waved with Peter waving back

Jillian Waters:Ladies and gentlemen, it is with great pleasure to have all of you here. Since reelection, one of my campaign promises is to help the cities poorest and homeless out of the street, and it is a task that I took to the fullest to achieve that goal. Well today I am pleased to announce that with the help of Silver Incorporated, along with the Bishop Enterprise, I am please to inform the funding and sponsorship of the Silver Institute Center for the Homeless

All of the guest and journalists applauded as Peter and Ned

Ned Lee:And that's how you deliver your touch on camera

Peter Parker:Huh?

Ned Lee:Mayor's putting up a face to look good on camera. I can tell Mayor Waters trying to deliver a promise she can't keep if she wants to avoid another political blow to her campaign trial

Peter Parker:What makes you say that Ned?

Ned Lee:Have you seen her election polls? She was that close from not winning, and she hasn't done much on her campaign promises. Especially on her dealing with crime, tackling corruption, and her handling of the economy. Plus the Government of New York here are just that much lazy, heck almost half of them didn't show up much when important issues are discussed. This is just her being all desperate to fix it due to her poor performance, and this event is just a way to make up for it

Peter Parker:That desperate to stay true to every word she's ever made?

Ned Lee:That's politics for you. You may talk the talk, but you can't walk the walk

Peter Parker:Damn. Sucks to be her

Ned Lee:Heh. No kidding

Jillian Waters:And now I would like to introduce to you the host of the evening. The CEO of Silver Incorporated, Sable Manfredi

Peter Parker:(Wait, what!?)

After hearing that name, Peter immediately recognizes the name as he sees the white-hair radiant beauty approaching on stage. Sable Manfredi, the daughter of crime boss Silvio Manfredi, and also going by the name Silver Sable

Peter Parker:I don't believe it

Ned Lee:I know. I mean look at her, she's gorgeous. But I know she'll turn me down and my heart is set for Betty

Peter Parker:What?

Ned Lee:She's about to speak

Sable Manfredi takes into stage as she stood on the podium and begins to speak on the microphone

Sable Manfredi:Thank you Mayor Waters and I would like to thank you all for supporting the Silver Institute Center for the Homeless. (Everyone giving applause) For a long time I have watched this city grown and matured, and it is a city that many of us will take pride, but despite its beauty it is also plagued with problems. We see people on the streets which their futures were taken away by corruption, drugs, and alcohol, families that wished for a home to live in, a job to provide a better life, and children wishing for an education for a brighter future, and for a long time we seek a way to help the ones that needed the most. And once the Institute is constructed with the help of Mayor Waters and Bishop Enterprise we will give those families and strangers on the streets a second chance in life to start over. A change to give them a better life, to give them jobs, to give their children an education, and a chance for a better life. And that is why this institute was made, and we will all give back what this city deserves, and what we can achieve together

The audience gave their applause to Sable's project, but Peter looked in suspicious and wonders her real motive behind this project

13 minutes later

After her speech, Peter stood afar as he watched Sable talking to a couple of guest as he still thinks about what she is up to. Then Kate appeared and joined him

Kate Bishop:Hey there super star

Peter Parker:Hey Katherine?

Kate Bishop:I said you can call me Kate, which makes us friends now okay?

Peter Parker:Um, okay… Kate

Kate Bishop:So Mr. Parker, enjoying the party?

Peter Parker:Heh, This is my first time being in something this expensive and I'm actually starting to see what you mean. Although the foods not bad, but too expensive for my taste. I'm usually a junk food kind of person

Kate Bishop:Really? Same here, I'm more of a junk food eater too

Peter Parker:Seriously? Wow, I never thought…

Kate Bishop:… Never thought what?

Peter Parker:Um, well I… uh… I mean you look…

Kate Bishop:Attractive is the word you're looking for?

Peter Parker:… Uh…

Kate Bishop:Heh, you're cute… I like that

Peter Parker:Um, thanks

Kate Bishop:So tell me Peter Parker, why goggling eyes on Miss Manfredi over there? I mean yeah she's totally gorgeous and all and I know why guys would be interested in her, but she's older then you if need reminding

Peter Parker:Sable Manfredi. How much do you know of her?

Kate Bishop:Only by her reputation, but she's been gaining a lot of influence in the business world recently

Peter Parker:How so?

Kate Bishop:Well her father has been well know for making her fortune on casinos, then real estate, then marketing, then… well… illegal business

Peter Parker:You mean Silvio Manfredi? Yeah I know of him

Kate Bishop:From the job right?

Peter Parker:You can say that. So what happened anyway?

Kate Bishop:Well over a year ago since her dad was in jail, something happened along the way and it caused her to redirect her father's business in something concrete. She invested her money in the stock market, managed to buy up some shares and even bought companies in a low price, and then own some other business that managed to generate a hefty amount of profit. She managed to turn it into a valuable company and now you have Silver Incorporated being a well known company to invest on. Perfectly legal and on the books

Peter Parker:Wow, and in a year?

Kate Bishop:I know. They say she's that much ruthless when it comes to keeping her staff in check, but there were even some interesting rumors involved that might explain something about her

Peter Parker:Like what?

Kate Bishop:I don't know, but they're saying it involves a certain man in her life that left her. They say this guy was the one that got his own Dad in jail

Peter Parker:Say what? (Hammerhead!? Oh you are kidding me! Wonder what happened?) So you think that might have caused her to play guardian angel?

Kate Bishop:No idea, but in the end it's just business as usual. And I don't think people ever realized that she's Silvio's daughter

Peter Parker:Why not? I mean it is obvious isn't it?

Kate Bishop:I know, but if it involves money on the table then your whole problems just disappear in an instant

Peter Parker:I kind of notice that already, but still

Kate Bishop:Don't beat yourself up thinking like that; it's just how it is in the world of the privileged. You just do what you can and hope for the best

Peter Parker:… Yeah…

Hilton Towers: Outside

Arriving near the Hilton Towers, the Beetle arrived as he sets up his gears

The Beetle:This is Beetle; I'm here at the destination point

? (com-link):Good, you see the target?

The Beetle:Yeah I see her. Time I get to work

? (com-link):Make sure you get the job done Beetle, because I don't want something to interruption to get in our way

The Beetle:Oy give me some credit, I'm a professional, name one flipping moron who's going stop me?

Hilton Towers: Dining Hall

On the other part of the room, Kate's sisters Susan and Heather are seen with their mother, Eleanor, as they saw their father talking to the Mayor and their business partners

Susan Bishop:This is starting to get dull fast

Heather Bishop:And why is Daddy taking so long

Eleanor Bishop:Come on girls, just bear with it for a while

Susan Bishop:You mean I have to bear the fact I have to endure having being stared and hit on by every guy in this party despite the fact that I'm getting married, and most of the women wanted to know what kind of wedding dress I'm getting

Heather Bishop:And the food taste weird

Eleanor Bishop:Speaking of, where's Kate?

Susan Bishop:Don't know, where is she

Heather Bishop:I see her, and she's speaking to a boy

Eleanor Bishop:Huh!?

Susan Bishop:What!?

Eleanor, Susan and Heather were surprised to see Kate on the other side of the hall and talking to a male individual with him, and appears to be enjoy his company

Eleanor Bishop:Oh my goodness

Susan Bishop:Who's that guy?

Eleanor Bishop:I do not know. I've never seen him before, but he looks modest

Susan Bishop:He looks kinda nerdy

Heather Bishop:I think he's cute

Susan Bishop:You think he's cute?

Heather Bishop:I may be 8 years old but I know a cute boy when I see one

Susan Bishop:Just like that cartoon boy from those kid shows you always watch?

Heather Bishop:Well I'm not googling eyes at a half dressed man in your magazines before your wedding

Susan Bishop:What!?

As the two talk, Kate got close to Peter as she wants to know more about him

Kate Bishop:So what about you Peter?

Peter Parker:Me?

Kate Bishop:Yeah, you already know about me so it's fair that I know about you

Peter Parker:Well there's nothing much to talk about

Kate Bishop:Oh come one, a guy who takes pictures of Spider-Man should have plenty of stories witnessing from gang wars to super-villain fights

Peter Parker:What do you wanna know about?

Kate Bishop:What school do you go to?

Peter Parker:Midtown Manhattan Magnet High School, you?

Kate Bishop:Hawthorne Academy

Peter Parker:Wow, that must be fun

Kate Bishop:You have no idea

Peter Parker:I wish, or else I would think of many reasons not too. Unless there's a teacher with a weird haircut and a funny accent

Kate Bishop:Then you should have met my other teachers, or worse my principle

Peter Parker:Heh. Oh man I think of dozens of ways I can picture that. Weird looking Aliens disguised as teachers with weirder looking haircuts that came to this planet to brainwash students into becoming douches so that they become their slaves and take over the world

Kate Bishop:Hehehe, oh man that is definitely my principle you're talking about, and he's bald

Peter Parker:Heh, then Huston we have a problem cause there's an alien shooting rays beams with his shiny bald head of doom

Kate Bishop:Hehehehe

Peter Parker:Hehehehe

Kate Bishop:Heh. That's funny

Peter Parker:Heh, thanks

Kate Bishop:… I like that…

Peter Parker:

Kate Bishop:… So… do you have a favorite subject?

Peter Parker:Um, well… I'm pretty good at science and maths if that's what want to know

Kate Bishop:So you like both science and maths?

Peter Parker:It's the only subjects I'm ever good at that got me an A

Kate Bishop:Wow, you must be really smart

Peter Parker:Thank you, and I know you're smart too

Kate Bishop:… Well to be honest I was never good at maths, science can be complicated sometimes and it often creeps me out because I had to dissect a frog once. It did not go so well

Peter Parker:Believe me you get use to it, but luckily I didn't dissect anything so I won't know about it

Kate Bishop:You're lucky, heck I was lucky to get a C- if it wasn't for some help, or else they'll be a nightmare of afternoon classes for me

Peter Parker:C- is not so bad

Kate Bishop:I know and I studied hard for it, but most of the guys I've been with sometimes think maths suck and science tends to be dull and boring. So to them the only people they think that likes to do those are the ones they consider that can't get an actual girlfriend or can't get a life

Peter Parker:Ah, those kind of guys. I know what you mean

Kate Bishop:Heck I had plenty of guys who were like that, except for this last guy I was with, and he was the longest I had been with in a relationship

Peter Parker:Oh, what about this guy?

Kate Bishop:This guy I was with is one of the most popular in all of Hawthorne Academy, who also belongs to one of the most wealthiest families in New York. He's really intelligent, extremely gorgeous to look at, and he's really good at sports. He made every guy feel like a moron and all the girls wish they would date him. I remember the time all the girls in my class were jealous of me because I was his girlfriend, and even the guys including my exes were jealous of him

Peter Parker:Really? Man this guy must be impressive

Kate Bishop:He is, heck we were Hawthorne Academy most hottest couple, that was until I realized how much of a jerk he is. He became an even bigger jerk when I dumped him, and all the girls were just completely shocked that I would even think about dumping him

Peter Parker:Wow. Sorry to hear that

Kate Bishop:Don't be. He's a first class jerk with an ego problem, but then I have to date these guys because society demand that I do, for maintaining my public image as the attractive daughter of the prestige Bishop family

Peter Parker:Must be tough

Kate Bishop:It is, and speaking of relationship do you have any yourself?

Peter Parker:… Ah… Well that is something I rather not talk about

Kate Bishop:Oh come on. Don't tell me the big shot photographer doesn't have a girl of his own?

Peter Parker:It's not that. It's just (spider-sense) What the!?

Suddenly, an explosion happened on the window, with glass and debris falling

Peter Parker:Huh!?

Kate Bishop:What!?

Sable's Henchmen 1:Miss Manfredi! Get back!

Sable's Henchmen 2:Protect Miss Manfredi!

Sable Manfredi:Who dares!?

Appeared and confronts Sable with his weapons on. The Beetle

The Beetle:Good evening Miss Sable Manfredi, or does Silver Sable fit love?

Sable Manfredi:Who are you!?

The Beetle:Beetle's the name and I've got a price-tag with your name on it!

Sable Manfredi:What!?

The Beetle:Sorry love, but you see this big tosser of a gun!? It's what I'm going to use to cut that flipping attractive head off! SO STAND STILL!

The Beetle opens fire as Sable's men tries to protect her as they fire back. People are then seen trying to escape the conflict, among them are the Bishop family as they try to reunite

Derek Bishop:ELEANOR!

Eleanor Bishop:I'M HERE DEREK!

Susan Bishop:DAD!

Heather Bishop:DADDY!

Derek Bishop:WHERE'S KATHERINE!?

Eleanor Bishop:SHE'S OVER THERE!

Eleanor points were Kate is, who is with Peter, as they ran towards her

Derek Bishop:KATHERINE!

Kate Bishop:DAD!

Eleanor Bishop:Sweetheart

Derek Bishop:We need to leave now!

Kate Bishop:How do we get out!?

Peter Parker:I know one! Follow me!

Kate Bishop:Okay!

Derek Bishop:Who's this!?

Peter Parker:LEE! MR. JAMESON!

Ned Lee:I'm here! Betty!?

Betty Brant:I'm okay!

J. Jonah Jameson:I'm fine also! Better take some pictures while you're at it!

Joan Jameson:Jonah!

J. Jonah Jameson:What!

Joan Jameson:Is there a way out of here!?

Peter Parker:Come with me! Lee!

Ned Lee:On it!

Peter and Ned kick down a fire exit as everyone escape

Peter Parker:Go! Get out of here!

Eleanor Bishop:Oh thank goodness!

Kate Bishop:Wait! What about you!?

Susan Bishop:Kate!?

Heather Bishop:Katie!?

Peter Parker:I'll be fine, just go!

Derek Bishop:He's right! We have to go now!

Eleanor Bishop:We need to leave sweetheart

Kate Bishop:But!?

Peter Parker:Go!

Kate Bishop:… Just take care of yourself

Peter Parker:You know I will!

Peter watched Kate go with her family down the stairs, but saw that Sable is in trouble and thought of an excuse

Ned Lee:Come on Peter!

Peter Parker:You guys go on ahead! I'll catch up!

Ned Lee:What!?

Betty Brant:But Peter!?

Peter Parker:No time to argue! Just go!

Joan Jameson:Parker!

J. Jonah Jameson:Just stay alive to get some good shots!

Joan Jameson:Jonah! What are you thinking!? He's just a boy!

J. Jonah Jameson:What!? He knows what he's doing!

Peter Parker:Go now! Go!

As everyone left, Peter stayed behind and got his camera out and placed it in position as he tries to find a hiding spot to change into Spider-Man, but then he saw Sable being attacked with her men being taken down by the Beetle with her falling on the floor as he appears to have gained the upper hand

Sable Manfredi:Ah! That was my favorite!

The Beetle:Oh I'm sorry, did I ruin your precious dress!?

Sable Manfredi:Who hired you!? And what business you have of me!?

The Beetle:Name's Beetle, and as for business… well don't take it personally because I'm just merely doing a job. I still find you bloody attractive though!

Beetle then brought out a rocket launcher and was about to fire at Sable, until Peter intervened

The Beetle:Say goodnight sweet (Cake splat at him) AH! WHAT THE!?

Sable Manfredi:What (Peter grabbed Sable's hand) Huh!?

Peter Parker:Run!

Sable got up and pick up a gun as Peter took her towards the fire exit

The Beetle:HEY! COME BACK HERE YOU LITTLE TOSSER!

Beetle tries to shoot at them, with Sable firing back

Peter Parker:Where almost out! How you're holding up!?

Sable Manfredi:I'm fine! Thank you!

Peter Parker:Don't worry about it!

Sable Manfredi:But who are you!?

Peter Parker:Name's Peter Parker, but now's not the time to discuss!

Sable Manfredi:Right! I agreed!

Peter Parker:(I can't believe I just saved Sable from the Beetle guy since the last time I saw her!)

They reached the fire exit, with Peter about to leave Sable near the door

Peter Parker:Go! Get out of here now!

Sable Manfredi:What!?

Peter Parker:Just go before (a wire wrapped around Peter) Ack!

Sable Manfredi:NO!

Sable watched Peter being pulled towards Beetle as he grabbed him

Peter Parker:Ah… Nice costume by the way

The Beetle:Boy that is not a nice way to get in the line of someone's business

Beetle threw Peter towards a wall, as Sable watched the debris collapsing on him

Sable Manfredi:NO! BOY!

The Beetle:Now you Ms. Manfredi! SO SMILE FOR THE BEETLE LOVE!

Sable Manfredi:DAMN YOU BUG!

Sable opened fire as she ran away, with the Beetle chasing after her. With the hall empty, Peter pushes back the debris and got out

Peter Parker:Agh, that was close. (Peter checked on Sable's men) (They're still breathing, good. Hope Sable's fine, because it's time for Spidey to make an entrance)

Hilton Towers: Stairway

In the stairway, Sable and Beetle continue to exchange fire as she got out of one of the floors

Sable Manfredi:I WON'T ASK YOU AGAIN BUG!

The Beetle:YOU WON'T NEED TO! THAT'S THE WHOLE POINT OF IT!

Sable Manfredi:Damn!

Hilton Towers: 87th floor

Beetle breaks in as he searches for Sable, who hides behind the pillars

The Beetle:Come on out Sable! I know you're in here! Let me kill you so I can say nice things about you!

Sable Manfredi:Like I'm about to have a bug flatter me while trying to kill me

The Beetle:Like I said, don't take it personally sweetheart

Beetle scans the floor and discovered fresh footprints behind the pillar as he opened fire, which Sable got out of cover and open fire at him, but fired a rocket at her as she jumped away and landed on the floor. As Sable tries to reach for the gun, Beetle appeared in front of her as he pointed a gun at her head

Sable Manfredi:… No…

The Beetle:… It's just a job

Sable Manfredi:

The Beetle:Sorry Princess, but it's time to bite the apple and say goodnight

As Beetle was about to pull the trigger his mask was suddenly covered in webs

The Beetle:AGH! WHAT THE!?

Sable Manfredi:Huh!? (Web-pull by Spider-Man and carried her off) Oof! Spider-Man!?

Spider-Man:Well nice to see you again Miss Manfredi and I see you hanging out with Bug Boy here

Sable Manfredi:If I wasn't so glad to see you I would shoot you, but right now you're getting me out of here!

Spider-Man:Noted

The Beetle:HEY! COME BACK HERE!

Beetle opened fire as Spider-Man got away while carrying Sable as they ended up in the lobby.

Hilton Towers: Reception lobby

Beetle then tackles him to the ground as Spider-Man threw Sable out of the way as he kicked back and jumped on the wall as Beetle confronts him

The Beetle:Now is that a proper way to interrupt someone while he's working!?

Spider-Man:Okay I gotta admit your suit looks awesome, but seriously who are you!?

The Beetle:Okay first of all, thanks you for the complement on this suit, and secondly the name is Beetle. And I prefer to have noninterference while I'm in a flipping job!

Spider-Man:And that would be!?

The Beetle:A proper large price-tag on Miss Manfredi's head, one I'm willing to collect for my new 42 inch LED Hi-Def TV to watch the footie on screen with some Indian curry and a pint of lager

Spider-Man:… I don't know how to reply to that

The Beetle:Well tough because… Ah bollocks!

Beetle saw Sable heading in the limo with her men as it drove off, as he bust through the door and chase after her with Spider-Man following.

Somewhere in Manhattan

Beetle chases after the limo and open fire at it, with Sable's men firing back, but then Spider-Man got closer as he jumped onto him as they break out from the building, causing them to fight in mid-air with Spider-Man giving Sable time to escape and leaving Beetle angry

The Beetle:GET OFF OF ME YOU LITTLE PRICK!

Spider-Man:Sorry Beetle, but you're not getting to her!

The Beetle:YOU FLIPPING BASTARD! I'LL BLOODY KILL YOU FOR COSTING ME MY PAYCHECK!

Spider-Man:Well is that anyway to live your life

The Beetle:HOW'S THIS FOR LIVING YOUR LIFE!?

Beetle activated his taser gloves and shocks Spider-Man off of him, but while unconscious Spider-Man fired his web-bullets at him while falling before landing on the ground, hitting one of his sonic grenades and causing Beetle in pain

The Beetle:AAAAAAGGH! BLOODY HELL THAT HURTS! OH SON OF A-

The Beetle crashed onto a billboard as he continues to flying away in pain

The Beetle:AGH! I'LL FLIPPING GET YOU FOR THIS SPIDER!

Meanwhile, the limo with Sable inside is seen driving on the road as they now notice the Beetle is not following

Sable's Henchmen 1:Bug's not following us Miss Manfredi, he's gone. The Spider must have taken care of him

Sable's Henchmen 2:Were heading back to the mansion

Sable's Henchmen 1:I'll call the boys, increase protection from that freak Miss Manfredi. But we're lucky that the Spider was in the area

Sable's Henchmen 2:Heh, didn't think Spider-Man would be there

Sable Manfredi:… Call Walters. I want whatever information he can obtain from this Beetle character. Someone placed a hit on my life and hired that freak to kill me. Whatever we can find about him might lead us to who hired him

Sable's Henchmen 1:Yes Miss Manfredi

Sable Manfredi:And give me all the list of my guest tonight along with images of their faces

Sable's Henchmen 1:Mistress?

Sable Manfredi:A young man just risked his own life to save me tonight. I wanna know who he is and if he survived. This young man, this… Peter Parker

Hilton Towers: Outside

Back at the event, most of the guest went home after what happened, with police officers arriving at the scene. Ned Lee returned from inside

Ned Lee:He's not in there!

Betty Brant:What!?

Ned Lee:Looked everywhere, there's no sign of him. Hope he got out

Betty Brant:Peter…

Joan Jameson:This is your fault Jonah!

J. Jonah Jameson:How can it be my fault!?

Joan Jameson:You had to let a young man like him enter an environment that dangerous!?

J. Jonah Jameson:Kid's not a rookie, and he's been in an environment like that. He'll be fine, he's a smart kid

Ned Lee:Hope you're right Jonah, because I can't think of what would happen to him

Betty Brant:Me neither

The Bishop family are also seen in the area, as Derek bid farewell to Mayor Waters who left by car, then approached his family

Derek Bishop:The driver is coming to pick us up, how are you girls holding up?

Eleanor Bishop:Were fine, thank goodness

Susan Bishop:That… was surprisingly awesome

Heather Bishop:We saw an actual super-villain, and Spider-Man

Derek Bishop:We barely survived from that encounter

Eleanor Bishop:And let us hope that was the last of it we'll ever encounter like that again

Kate Bishop:… Hope Peter's alright

Derek Bishop:Who's Peter?

Susan Bishop:The boy Katherine was with and the one that helped us escape

Eleanor Bishop:That young man?

Susan Bishop:Yep

Kate Bishop:He's done something like this before; I know he'll be fine

Derek Bishop:He'll be fine sweetheart, don't worry about it

Kate Bishop:

Somewhere in New York, Spider-Man is seen in the alleyway as he still appears to be injured from the fall

Spider-Man:Ow. That… really hurt. Didn't think… I would survive a fall like that… and I'm slipping… now my head is bleeding… ow…

Spider-Man suddenly fell in the ground and appearing to be unconscious as his head appears to be bleeding

Spider-Man:Okay… now I'm dizzy. Need… to lay low… for a while… ah… my life… really… sucks…

Spider-Man now lies on the floor unconscious and unable to open his eyes, but suddenly the elderly Rastafarian woman in read appeared as she approached the unconscious young hero

?:dis is di weava's criss champion? An a young mon nuh less. Well young spida, let us get yuh help, an see ow yuh fare

AUTHOR'S NOTE: Had to do some rewrites here, but yeah here it is

In this my version of the Beetle is based on the Ultimate version, but I decided to make him British because of the movie "Elysium". I was actually going to do a video on YouTube involving clips from the "Ultimate Spider-Man" cartoon, but I imagined having Sharlto Copley's Kruger in the role as the Beetle if they did "The Amazing Spider-Man 3" for the Sinister Seven instead of the Sinister Six

Another character I've introduced is an elderly Rastafarian woman, whose name I'll introduce in the next chapter, but if you're smart you can figure out who she is

And lastly is the role of Sable Manfredi, or Silver Sable, as she will be involved in Peter's life in a future story I've thought off, which you'll have to wait

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