Chained to the Whirlpool Rewrite

Naruto
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Chained to the Whirlpool Rewrite
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Summary
Everybody knows how Naruto and Sakura act toward each other. He loves her and she hates him but what if things were different and a certain blonde is going to get sucked into a world of pain and pleasure.(This is, as it says in the title, a rewrite by the original author. It's tamer in comparison to the original.)(If you're willing please give me some feedback on it)*Please check out chapter 16-notice
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The rewrite by the original writer Gnosismaster (also known as Gaara of the Desert or Gravemind).Now there are parts of this that I like and as I stated in the Original I'm having trouble figuring out what to keep and change.I'm hoping to get some fresh feedback to help me decide.Now keep in mind that this rewrite still depicts minors engaging in sexual acts revolving around BDSM but not as hardcore as the original. So if you aren't into that then leave right now.For those of you who still want to check it, enjoy and R&R.
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Poll

So I just noticed that the AFF forums had a poll option.

So I wanted to ask all of you if I should continue with BETA or just get started working on the rewrite and what change I should make regarding Hinata's role in the story.

Here is the link: https://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/76453-chained-to-the-whirlpool-betarewrite-poll/

I'm going to leave it up for about month.

BTW- you'll need to register to vote.

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