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Hello everyone!
I'm back (yeah, I know, that might be a bit of a shock). I've had a few months of burnout, lost my inspiration, and let's be honest, I'm as broke as a joke, so I wasn't really in the mood to write. But I've decided to get back into it. To start, I've completely reworked the chapters, which were way too long and difficult to read.
Let's face it, my chapters were like walls of text, packed with alliterations, litotes, and other stylistic tricks that ended up being a bit of a drag. The long-winded descriptions made it easy to zone out, which was definitely not the goal. So, I've shortened the chapters, tweaked a few things, and even made some changes to the story. I've also made sure to add more dialogue because that's where the action is (and let's be real, we all tend to jump straight to the dialogue).
I'm still publishing on the infamous platform (you know the one, ...), but you can find me online by searching for Kelorus' Fictions and choosing the site with a big white "P" on a black background.
For the nitpickers out there warning me that I might end up with Rowling or Warner breathing down my neck, I assure you that's not the case, mainly because it would have to be clearly interesting to them (i.e., generating over 10,000 euros a month easily), and it could actually backfire as bad publicity (let's not forget, fan fiction played a huge role in the success of Harry Potter). Plus, I'm offering people the chance to support me financially, through donations, rather than selling anything, since eventually, all my work will be free.
Catch you in the fiction The Mage book 1 : Harry and the Black familly, and just so you know, I'll be taking down this version of my story in about a week.
Here's the link : https://archiveofourown.org/works/62896930/chapters/161055577