Before hogsmeade

Harry Potter - J. K. Rowling
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Before hogsmeade
Summary
Barty and James go to hogsmeade but before(I stopped this is horrible writing)
Note
First ever written book and it so bad

Barty has been staring at James for the past 5 minutes.

[Barty Pov]

BARTY hello can you hear me evan waved his hand imfront of his face What barty answered oh I don't know maybe I have been trying to get your attention but you have been staring at loverboy for the past 5 minutes I have not barty answered yeh you have Regulus replied so what do you see him, he's just so pretty and good he so oblivious why won't he just stare at me jesus barty and we're though James was pathetic Regulus said why am I pathetic reg? Oh just your love life potter evan said laughing his head of why barty was kicking him under the table barty "James" "barty" "well I have a question" of course you do I was wondering if you could come with me to hogsmeade today Siri said he was going on a date with moons and Peter is going with the girls? Yeh sure what do you need a hogsmeade barty asked oh nothing I just like going the environment yk I meet you at the front of the Slytherin common rooms in a hour James said half yelling and rushing of Regulus looked at barty your pathetic.

This is so bad omg I really don't know how to write a story