Chapter 33
A Promise Given
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Chapter Thirty-Three
The wind whistled low across the moor, brushing over the tall, amber grass like fingers over harp strings. Fog clung to the ground in languid drifts, curling through the heather and pooling in the hollows where sheep paths once ran. The sky hung low and colorless above the Yorkshire Dales, a bleak wash of grey that promised rain before nightfall.
The ruin loomed ahead—a crooked silhouette against the horizon. What had once been a proud manor was now little more than a husk, its stone walls leaning at uncertain angles, the roof partially collapsed, ivy clawing up the southern face like nature itself had grown hungry. The iron gate lay rusted in the underbrush, half-buried by time, and the remnants of old wards crackled faintly as they crossed the threshold, discharging with a sullen pop of blue light and a metallic tang in the air.
Dumbledore paused at the edge of the property, his eyes sharp behind half-moon spectacles. The long hem of his cloak stirred in the wind, brushing against damp earth and broken flagstones. “It would seem the only wards left are the Muggle-Repelling and Concealment Charms,” he murmured.
Remus nodded, pulling his coat tighter around his shoulders. The January chill had crept into his bones hours ago, but here, amid the crumbled stones and fading magic, the cold felt deeper—older. “This place has been dead a long time,” he said.
A few steps inside and the weight of silence settled like a shroud. There was no birdsong, no distant bleats from sheep—just the soft, ceaseless sighing of the wind. The manor’s main door—if it could still be called that—hung from a single hinge, and when Remus nudged it open, the groan it gave was almost human.
Inside, the air was thick with the scent of mildew and old ash. Splintered beams littered the stone floor where the roof had collapsed, and a fireplace black with soot stood like a dark mouth at the far end of the room. Ivy had pushed through cracks in the mortar, twining around broken furniture and the shattered remains of what may once have been a chandelier.
Dumbledore moved with deliberate steps, his wand lit but held low. He paused at a scorched mark on the wall—a rough circle edged with strange, curling runes, faded almost to invisibility. “Blood magic,” he said quietly. “Old. Rudimentary, but deliberate. Ritualistic.” He sniffed the air, frowning.
“Not all blood magic is evil,” Remus replied.
“This is true, Remus. But this... this is not benevolent in nature. It’s off—I can almost smell its foulness.”
Remus raised an eyebrow. Dumbledore was many great things, but each time he engaged with the headmaster, he learned something new. Magic had a smell? He was a werewolf, and he could smell nothing but mould and rot.
Albus crouched beside a broken table, brushing away debris to reveal a sigil scorched into the wood. He recognized the shape—one he’d seen before, sketched in the margins of Apology to a Broken Mirror, half-lost in the ramblings of a man teetering on the edge of reason.
“Wentworth was definitely here. It’s good to know the older Ministry records had some merit,” he said. “This was a locus.”
Remus inclined his head, his expression distant, thoughtful. “Well, at least we’re in the right place,” he said. The manor felt uneasy, like something had clawed its way through the very atmosphere.
Dumbledore turned toward the collapsed stairwell, the wood rotted through and thick with moss. “Let’s see what this place is still willing to yield.”
Outside, thunder rumbled distantly, and the wind began to pick up—nature itself stirring, as if uneasy about what lingered in the bones of the house. The deeper they went, the more the house seemed to close in around them.
What remained of the manor’s western wing was cloaked in shadows, thick with the smell of damp stone, old magic, and something sourer—like spoiled meat or long-dried blood. The wallpaper had rotted away, exposing pale plaster beneath, and on those sickly walls were marks.
At first, they were neat. Careful. Carved with intention. A line here, a verse there, etched with the precision of someone who still believed that words might save him.
"She said goodbye with her eyes, but not her mouth."
"The world stole her name. I remember. I remember."
Remus ran his fingers lightly over one, noting the depth, the steadiness of the letters.
They passed through what might once have been a music room—splintered floorboards creaked underfoot, and an ancient piano slouched in the corner, its keys yellowed and split. Ivy grew through the cracks in the wall, coiling like veins. A music stand still held a scrap of sheet music, bloated with moisture and streaked with faint red stains.
Then the markings on the walls changed.
On the far wall, slashed across the plaster in jagged strokes, the tone darkened.
"She danced with him. She smiled."
"Lies, lies, lies."
"THEY TOOK HER MIND TO MAKE HER TAINTED."
These weren’t lines etched carefully—they were scratched, gouged deep as if by claw or broken wandtip. Splinters curled away from the wall like skin peeled back. Beneath one particularly vicious mark, the plaster had flaked off entirely, revealing stone beneath, pitted and darkened.
Remus felt a chill in his bones.
More writings filled the walls as they turned a corner—some looping over each other in a mad tapestry. The hand changed again, the letters now crooked, tilted, oversized.
"Her laughter is in the walls. I hear it when I bleed."
"She was mine. He ripped her out of me."
"Let the blood remember. Let the bones wake."
“Merlin,” Remus whispered. “This is the ramblings of a mad man”
“It’s more than that,” Dumbledore said, eyes fixed on a section of the wall where symbols had been drawn in something that looked unnervingly like rust—or dried blood. “This is ritual. He was using this pain. Turning it into something. I imagine this was the curse I am following”
“Which you still cannot tell me about”
“No I cannot, I would be breaking confidences Remus”
Some of the symbols spiraled—tight, concentric shapes surrounded by scratch marks like talons. There were rows of tally marks too, slashed in reckless clusters. Fifty in one place. Hundreds in another.
The words started bleeding into images—rough, childlike sketches of a woman’s face repeated again and again. Sometimes she was smiling. Sometimes weeping. Sometimes her mouth was wide open in a scream, no eyes in her sockets at all.
And then came the mirror references that Dumbledore had seen in his notes.
"She’s in the mirror."
"The mirror remembers. The mirror weeps."
"I broke it and still she speaks."
“It moves on claws and speaks and shrieks, the darkness manifests on this streets”
“She … No it speaks and haunts me”
They turned the next corner and entered what could only have once been the study.
The air here was thicker. Heavier. Not with dust or rot, though both were present in spades—but with something intangible. A pressure, like the room itself had been wrung through grief too many times and never released. Books lay scattered across the floor, their pages water-warped and blackened with mildew. A great desk slouched under the weight of its own decay, its surface scorched in places, stained in others. Shelves lined the walls, some collapsed under the burden of age, others still stubbornly upright, their contents askew.
A fireplace stood cold and empty, its mantle cracked, and above it hung the fragmented remains of what might have once been a portrait, the canvas torn straight through the center. One corner remained, showing the edge of a woman's dress and a glimpse of auburn hair.
Remus saw another scribble on the wall.
“I warned them, but they did not listen”
“I still hear their screams from the valley and down the halls, I warned them”
“It creeps”
“Merlin, what is this madness” Remus muttered.
Dumbledore moved with care. There was something sacred about the room. Not holy, but raw. A shrine to memory and madness. He knelt near the desk, brushing away layers of grime to reveal a stack of old journals bound in flaking leather.
“These are his,” he said softly, reverently. “Marcus Wentworth.”
He picked one up and began to read.
March 29th, 1768
The frost has finally loosened its grip on the land. The orchard buds pink, and the brook is no longer choked with ice. I walked the moors this morning, and the sky was the colour of soft milk, pierced only by the cry of distant larks.
Mary returns next week. I’ve instructed Mrs. Whitlow to ready the blue room. She always loved the light in that chamber. Strange, how a single announcement—a name in a letter—can awaken something long sleeping. I dreamed of her last night. We were children again, racing through the heather, our hands stained with berries, our laughter wild and innocent. I awoke with tears in my eyes.
April 5th, 1768
She arrived this afternoon, her boots dusty from travel and her eyes brighter than I remembered. There is something different in her carriage—a poise, perhaps. She walks like a woman who has seen cities and heard music I could only imagine. But she laughed when she saw me. A real laugh. Not out of politeness, but recognition. My Yorkshire Rose.
We walked the grounds. I pointed out the new rose trellises and the stone bench under the old sycamore. “You kept it all the same,” she said, with a kind of surprised affection. I did. I always have. I think I always will.
April 21st, 1768
We picnicked by the river today, just the two of us, as though no time had passed. I brought her favourite cheeses—she remembered, though she teased me for it. She told me about London: the plays, the salons, the men. I listened quietly. I think she noticed.
There was a moment—just a heartbeat—when her hand brushed mine. She did not pull away. Nor did she speak. We sat like that until the sun dipped below the ridge. I did not want to move. I feared the spell would break.
May 10th, 1768
She caught me watching her at supper. I thought myself discreet, but she met my eyes across the table and gave me a strange smile. Not mocking. Not unkind. But distant. As though she had already boarded the carriage in her mind and left me behind.
Later, I walked the orchard paths alone, replaying the look in her eyes. I cannot name the feeling it stirred in me. Something hollow. Something fragile. She is here—and yet, she is not mine to hold.
June 6th, 1768
She spoke today of a man she met in London. I forced a smile. It cracked at the corners. I asked polite questions. I said all the right things. She did not notice my hand trembling when I poured her tea.
Later, in the gallery, I looked at her portrait—the one Father had commissioned when we were children. Her eyes in the painting hold the same softness. But I know now that softness is not meant for me. I should burn the damned thing for it mocks me.
July 1st, 1768
He arrived this morning. Tall, charming, and dressed like a peacock. He kissed her hand and spoke to her in French. She laughed—that laugh, the one she used to reserve for me when we were small and the world was ours.
I watched from the corridor, heart clenched like a fist. She leans toward him when he speaks. He touches her arm as if he has done so many times before. She does not move away.
I smiled so wide I thought my skin would split. When I was alone, I screamed into my pillow until my voice cracked.
August 18th, 1768
Father says I am pale. I told him the light here is poor. He offered to send me to Bath. I declined.
Mother hovers.
Mary no longer seeks me out. Our walks have ceased. She eats with him now at her cottage. Laughs with him. I am a ghost in these halls. A shadow at the edge of her joy. Once I dreamed of growing old beside her. Now I dream only of silence.
And in the silence, something answers back.
October 3rd, 1768
She is to be wed. He proposed beneath the orchard tree. I watched through the glass. I should not have, but I had to see. He knelt. She cried. She said yes.
I laughed. I truly did. Not out of joy, but something colder. Harsher. The sound echoed through the corridor like a bell tolling death.
Later, I sat in the dark and whispered her name until my voice grew hoarse. I wrote it again and again in the margins of this book. The ink ran like blood. It felt right.
Love is a curse, a cruel trick.
November 14th, 1768
I went to her cottage today. I should not have, but the ache in my chest has become unbearable. The frost clung to the hedges, and my breath fogged the air, but I felt nothing. I knocked. She opened the door, surprised, but not displeased. She never is—not at first.
I brought her flowers. She smiled, thanked me, and turned to set them in water, as though it were nothing. As though I had not chosen each stem with trembling hands. As though I had not rehearsed every word I was about to say a hundred times in the still of the night.
I told her.
I told her I loved her.
That I had always loved her.
That no man could love her better, or truer, or more deeply. I told her I would give her the world, or burn it down at her feet. That I dreamt of her. That she lived in my every breath, every waking thought. I begged her—yes, I begged her—to give me a chance. Just one. Just let me love her, and I would spend my life proving I was worthy.
She was quiet. Then, gently. Always gentle, damn her. She said no. Soft and clear, like the toll of a bell. She said she never felt that way. Never had. Never could. I saw sympathy in those eyes.
She loved another, she reminded me, each word a dagger to my heart.
In my desperation I took her hands, begging her more, begging her not to marry him, not to leave she was my Oak. She pulled away. I stepped forward. She flinched.
She asked me to leave.
I did not listen.
I asked why. Over and over. What was wrong with me? What had I done wrong? She said nothing. Just stood there, cold and still, like marble. And when I reached for her, she raised her voice—loud enough for the neighbors to hear. There was fear in her voice.
Fear.
I left. I had to. The door shut behind me with a finality I will never forget. The onlookers eyed me like a fool, like a poison.
November 30th, 1768
Dr. Hemsley visited today. A soft-handed man with spectacles too large for his face. He spoke of melancholy. Of mind and imbalance. As though my pain were an illness to be cured.
I spoke little. I think he feared me. Good. He should.
Mary is leaving soon, in the new year. To marry. To live. I will remain here in these forsaken moors, in the house that watched us grow. And rot. Something inside me is curling inward, like a leaf touched by frost. I cannot feel my hands at night. Only the ache where her name once lived.
January 12th, 1769
She wrote him again. I intercepted the letter, the owl was easy to spot. Perfumed. Careless. Thoughtless. How easily she writes words of love. Words she never gave me.
I burned it in the fireplace. Watched the flame devour her loops and flourishes. It was beautiful. I did not cry. Not this time. I simply watched. I am learning to let go of the man I was. He is no longer useful.
March 2nd, 1769
The dreams have returned. The woman stands at the foot of my bed. No eyes. No mouth. But she speaks—inside me. Her voice is inside me. She tells me of old things. Of a relic buried beneath stone. Of power bound in blood and ash. She says she knows how to make it stop.
She says I can share my pain. That it is only fair. And I agree.
April 13th, 1769
I found it. Beneath the old chapel in the village, in the crypt no priest dares bless. A heart of stone, cracked and weeping dark water. I touched it. It pulsed. The voice screamed and laughed and screamed again. I laughed too.
I dreamt of Mary standing in the snow, and every step she took, the ground beneath her withered. No one held her hand. No one called her name.
The relic will do what I cannot. It will make her understand.
May 1st, 1769
I have written the words. I traced them in salt and blood. Her name, carved into the stone with my own nail. She will never be loved again. The world will grow cold to her. Affection will curdle. Passion will rot.
And she will not know why. Only that love flees her, like light from a dying candle. As mine fled me. This is balance. This is justice.
May 4th, 1769
It is done. The relic sleeps again, the curse bound. The chapel is sealed. My hand still bleeds where the stone bit me. It does not matter. I feel... nothing. Not joy. Not sorrow. Only silence.
I am but a ruin. The echo of a heart that loved too deeply and was left to rot. And she—she will carry that echo forever.
Mary, what you have wrought me will be passed to you.
Dumbledore’s fingers were still resting on the final page. The fire had long since died in the grate, but the room felt no colder. He didn’t speak for a long time.
Remus stood at his shoulder, silent. His eyes scanned the final lines, then returned to the top of the last entry. “He cursed her to a loveless existence,” he said muttering in horror. “He couldn’t have her, so he made sure she could have no one else. That’s not love.”
“No,” Dumbledore said. “It never was. Well perhaps once it was”
He closed the journal with a quiet finality, the leather creaking as if in protest.
“He started as a boy in pain,” Remus went on. “Someone you might even pity””
Dumbledore nodded. “Wentworth mistook longing for devotion. When Mary made a choice that did not include him, he believed himself wronged. As though she owed him something for the feelings he offered freely.”
Remus glanced back at the sketches—Mary’s face again and again, each more haunted than the last.
“That last entry,” he said. “He didn’t see her as a person anymore. Only a symbol of everything he thought he deserved.”
Dumbledore’s voice was low. “It is a dangerous thing, obsession”
The Headmasters eyes lingered on the drawings, his brow furrowing as though he were peering into a murky fog that clouded his understanding. Each sketch of Mary—etched with such feverish precision—was a twisted reflection of a mind unraveling.
The first few were simple enough, almost innocent. A portrait of her face—her eyes wide, mouth slightly curved in a gentle smile, as if still unaware of the shadow growing in the artist's heart. But as Dumbledore’s gaze moved from one to the next, the changes became apparent.
Mary’s eyes, once serene, began to stretch wider in each drawing, as though the light in them dimmed with every line Wentworth drew. Her smile, once delicate, slowly morphed into something that seemed more pained than joyful. The color drained from her cheeks, and her features grew gaunt. The further the drawings went, the more pronounced the panic in her eyes. The smile twisted into a grimace, lips pulled too thin, the skin beneath her eyes hollow, as though something deep inside her was breaking.
And then the final images.
Here, in these sketches, her face had become a mask of terror—eyes wide and unblinking, pupils dilated with a kind of unspoken horror. Her mouth was open, but no sound came. It was as though she was screaming without voice. One of the pictures showed her reaching out to something—or someone—though her hand trembled with a chilling uncertainty. In another, her face had contorted, the lines so jagged and sharp that it no longer resembled the woman Wentworth once adored. It was as if every detail of her humanity was being slowly eroded with each stroke of the quill.
The last drawing was the most disturbing—an image of her alone in a landscape that had once been familiar, the moors stretching out into endless emptiness. But her figure was small, almost lost, surrounded by twisting, skeletal trees that seemed to claw at her from all sides. In the background, there was no warmth, no life—just shadows, deep and consuming, filling the space around her. She looked as though she had been drawn in her final moments, staring into an abyss she could neither escape nor understand.
Both men recoiled slightly, as if the drawings themselves had the power to reach out and touch them. The air felt heavier, thicker, the space between them charged with a creeping wrongness that sank deep into their chests.
Remus’s throat tightened as he looked away, his gaze darting toward the door as though the room itself had become too small. “It feels... wrong,” he whispered, his voice strained. “Like looking into a window you’re not meant to see.”
Dumbledore didn’t respond immediately. His lips were pressed into a thin line, his gaze darkening. There was something about those images—something ancient, cruel, and twisted—that unsettled him in a way he couldn’t name. It was as though the very act of capturing her image had become a form of possession, an attempt to reduce Mary into nothing more than an object of Wentworth’s tortured desire. It made him feel... dirty, like the air had turned foul around them.
For a moment, he simply stared at the drawings, his fingers twitching as if he wanted to reach out and tear the pages from the book. Something about these pictures—these distorted, tortured renditions of a woman whose only crime was to not love him back in the right way—made Dumbledore feel the need to burn them all, to rid the world of these fractured visions.
“Disgusting,” he murmured at last. “He trapped her in his madness. Made her his prison.”
Remus’s jaw clenched. He understood that feeling. “I’d rather not see any more.”
“I quite agree”
Neither of them moved for a moment. They stood in silence. Then, the groan of a floorboard overhead. A dragging sound—slow, deliberate. They both turned their heads upwards toward the sound.
“Albus...” Remus said carefully.
Dumbledore held up a hand. “Not the wind.”
The dragging sound above grew louder, unnervingly close. It was no longer a faint echo but a deliberate, slow pull—like something scraping the floor with jagged nails. The air seemed to tighten, as if the house itself was drawing in a breath, holding it.
Dumbledore stiffened, his wand flickering in his hand. Remus felt his blood run cold. His chest tightened. There was no mistaking it. This was not the wind. It wasn’t an animal. It was something else entirely.
Without a word, Dumbledore stepped toward the door, his voice a low murmur. “We need to leave. Now.”
Remus didn’t need to be told twice. He turned, his eyes darting across the room, but all he could see were the shadows, swirling and thickening in the corners of the study. The creaking, louder now, and something felt wrong—so wrong about the air in that place. He could taste the acrid, burnt metal tang of fear on his tongue.
The dragging sound above them grew louder, sharper, faster. Each scrape of claws against wood sent a shiver down their spines. And then, without warning, it came.
A sound. A scream.
It was not human. It was a wail of pain, a shriek of terror and agony so deep, so raw, that it seemed to tear through the very walls of the manor. It was a woman’s scream—but it was wrong. It shattered the stillness of the house, reverberating in every bone, every nerve. The sound crawled into the depths of their minds, clawing at their sanity.
Remus froze, his heart slamming against his ribs. It was a scream that no one should hear—something too horrible to exist outside of a nightmare. It felt like it would tear him apart from the inside out. His skin prickled with dread. He could feel the darkness of it pressing in on him, suffocating him, suffusing the very air.
Beside him, Dumbledore’s face had gone pale. His usual composure was faltering—just for a moment, but it was enough to send a cold spike of fear into Remus’s heart. He had never heard Dumbledore so unsettled.
The floorboards above them groaned again as the scream ceased. A sound like dragging limbs—unnatural, too heavy, too wrong. Then a rapid thud, thud, thud. Something fast, coming down the hall. Whatever it was, it was heading straight for them.
“Move!” Dumbledore commanded.
They bolted, pushing through the dark halls toward the front door, but the air seemed to thicken with dread, as though the house itself was resisting their exit, forcing them to stay.
Suddenly, Remus caught a glimpse of it—no more than a flash, but it was enough. The creature was there thundering down the stairs from the third floor. It was a shadow—a mass of black, ragged strips of cloth, like the remnants of something once human, or perhaps something that had never been human at all. Its long arms scraped across the floor, claws dragging like some monstrous insect. Its face—or what might have been a face—was obscured by darkness, but he could feel its presence, a presence that was hunger, rage, and something much deeper. A twisted echo of a broken heart.
The creature’s movements were jerky, unnatural. It was no longer crawling but rushing—its speed was terrifying. The shriek of its voice split the air again, filling the space with a sound that was both anguished and threatening. Remus felt it—knew it, deep in his bones—that this must have been the result of a curse, a thing bound by obsession and despair. A specter born from a heart that had loved too violently, too madly.
They reached the door, but it slammed shut just as they tried to escape. Remus felt a sickening pressure in his chest. Dumbledore’s voice, now urgent, echoed through the hall. “Out of my way.” With a flick of his wand, the door blasted open.
They ran, unthinking, down the overgrown path, the night air cool against their skin, but their hearts were racing. Remus’s breath was ragged as he glanced back over his shoulder, expecting the worst.
A moment later, Dumbledore spun toward the manor. His wand flared with a brilliant light, a flare of fiery power—the firefyre. The flame erupted from his wand, roaring like a wild beast unleashed.
The manor shuddered in response. Flames roared through the windows, licking at the stone, turning the ancient house into an inferno. The sound of burning wood mixed with the scream—the agonizing, unearthly shriek that rang from within the manor, reverberating through the moors. It was a wail of despair, but it held something far darker beneath it, as though the house, and all it held, were finally dying.
As the fire blazed, the specter’s scream rose above it all, piercing the night. The shriek reached a pitch that felt like it would tear the very fabric of reality. Remus covered his ears, but the sound still vibrated in his bones. It was the sound of a soul lost to madness, a cry that would never fade.
The house began to crumble under the weight of the flames. Stone and timber cracked and splintered, the ancient walls collapsing as the fire consumed them. In that moment, it seemed that everything—the love, the obsession, the curse—was being burned away, leaving nothing behind but the smoke and the remnants of a broken past.
Dumbledore’s face was hard, his eyes flicking toward the destruction with a mixture of regret and resolve. He turned away as the house began to fall, the last of Wentworth’s legacy being consumed by the flames.
“What was that?” Remus wheezed, his body still rigid from the scream, from whatever that thing was.
Dumbledore’s gaze remained fixed on the crumbling manor, the flames casting eerie shadows across his face. “I know not, Remus,” he muttered, his voice low. “I have seen many things in our world, but that… that seemed like a manifestation. A creature born of obsession, perhaps, or something darker.”
The building groaned as another part of the roof collapsed, sending a wave of sparks into the night sky. Dumbledore didn’t flinch, his focus unwavering. “But our task is not yet through. From the journals, he mentioned a church in the village. To my knowledge, there is one—old and abandoned—not far from here. It might hold the answers we seek.”
“A wizarding village?” Remus asked, his breath still shallow.
“No, I think not. But let us see if we can locate this relic. If it’s what Wentworth referred to, it might be a reliquary, something that could help us in our search.”
Remus nodded, though unease still coiled in his stomach. He could still hear that woman’s shriek echoing in his ears. Whatever that thing had been, it would haunt him for some time. He just hoped that whatever they found in the village would make it worth it. They had to stop whatever darkness had taken root, especially if it could help Harry.
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What do you think about the origins of the Wentworth curse? I won't lie this was perhaps my best chapter I’ve written in my view. I may or may not have stayed up far to late writing this and also it advisable to write such things in the dark.
There may be more journals yet, did you enjoy them?
Let me know your thoughts and theories.