Pride and Prejudice: a Jily story

Harry Potter - J. K. Rowling Pride and Prejudice - Jane Austen
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Pride and Prejudice: a Jily story
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Jily Pride and Prejudice AUAs news reach of a young wizard, Black, settling into the neighbouring estate of Netherthorne, the witches of Sylvanbourn strive to make his acquaintance.Nobody knows a series of convenient, though unexpected, and controversial, nuptials would spring from such an occasion.Lest of all, the independent Lily and the resolutely cold Mr. Potter. (The text is Austen’s original novel, with name-character-place adjustments).
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About the story...- As an avid reader of Jily literature, I have always thought that their dynamic perfectly resembled that of the protagonists of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice: two people who are attracted to each other, without even realizing it, but who can’t at first ignore what they deem to be impossible defects of character.Deciding to pick up Austen’s novel, I thought it would be the easiest thing in the world to replace some names, add some extra definitions here and there, and transform it into James and Lily Potter’s story.- When reading this story, you will be reading Pride and Prejudice. I thought of rewriting the whole thing anew, but then it would have felt as a sort of insult to the author: the study of character and the careful construction of their dynamic cannot so easily be replicated.- Lily Evans and Elizabeth Bennet are spectacularly similar, and in fact they may share the same character. What bothers me, is that James’ and Darcy’s characters are nothing alike. You will feel it while reading, but I found no solution to it, for any correction would have destroyed the basis of the story. Their pureness of heart and impossible devotion to their loved one, however, remain unaltered.- The characters in this story will be magical. I thought to add some details here and there just to prove my point, but the essence itself remains that of a period, social work; not a fantasy. Humans divide themselves by means of titles and jobs, and the best I could do was add blood-status to the mix—an apparently unsurmountable barrier. The meanings of nobleship against workingmen, I have left unaltered, but I think they fit in just well with the blood discourse.- Some characters are taken directly from the Marauders fandom; others, I have decided to invent myself—namely Lily’s sisters (outside from Petunia) and James’ own sister.- If you’ve never read Pride and Prejudice and had been meaning to do so, reading this will be just as good as reading the novel instead.Credits to the two Js: Jane Austen and J.K.R.
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Happily ever after

Happy for all her maternal feelings was the day on which Mrs. Evans got rid of her two most deserving daughters. With what delighted pride she afterwards visited Mrs. Black, and talked of Mrs. Potter, may be guessed. I wish I could say, for the sake of her family, that the accomplishment of her earnest desire in the establishment of so many of her children produced so happy an effect as to make her a sensible, amiable, well-informed woman for the rest of her life; though perhaps it was lucky for her husband, who might not have relished domestic felicity in so unusual a form, that she still was occasionally nervous and invariably silly.

Mr. Evans missed his second daughter exceedingly; his affection for her drew him oftener from home than anything else could do. He delighted in going to Pemberlune, especially when he was least expected.

Mr. Black and Daisy remained at Netherthorne only a twelvemonth. So near a vicinity to her mother and Myrthvale relations was not desirable even to his easy temper, or her affectionate heart. The darling wish of his sisters was then gratified; he bought an estate in a neighbouring county to Derbyshire, and Daisy and Lily, in addition to every other source of happiness, were within thirty miles of each other.

Violet, to her very material advantage, spent the chief of her time with her two elder sisters. In society so superior to what she had generally known, her improvement, also in the magical field, was great. She was not of so ungovernable a temper as Heather; and, removed from the influence of Heather’s example, she became, by proper attention and management, less irritable, less ignorant, and less insipid. From the further disadvantage of Heather’s society she was of course carefully kept, and though Mrs. Snape frequently invited her to come and stay with her, with the promise of balls and young men, her father would never consent to her going.

Petunia was the only daughter who remained at home; and she was necessarily drawn from the pursuit of accomplishments by Mrs. Evans’s being quite unable to sit alone. Petunia was obliged to mix more with the world, but she could still moralize over every morning visit; and as she was no longer mortified by comparisons between her sisters’ beauty and her own, it was suspected by her father that she submitted to the change without much reluctance.

As for Snape and Heather, their characters suffered no revolution from the marriage of her sisters. He bore with philosophy the conviction that Lily must now become acquainted with whatever of his ingratitude and falsehood had before been unknown to her; and in spite of every thing, was not wholly without hope that Potter might yet be prevailed on to make his fortune. The congratulatory letter which Lily received from Heather on her marriage, explained to her that, by his wife at least, if not by himself, such a hope was cherished. The letter was to this effect:

My Dear Lily, 

I wish you joy. If you love Mr. Potter half as well as I do my dear Snape, you must be very happy. It is a great comfort to have you so rich, and when you have nothing else to do, I hope you will think of us. I am sure Snape would like a place at court very much, and I do not think we shall have quite money enough to live upon without some help. Any place would do, of about three or four hundred a year; but however, do not speak to Mr. Potter about it, if you had rather not.

Yours, etc.’

As it happened that Lily had much rather not, she endeavoured in her answer to put an end to every entreaty and expectation of the kind. Such relief, however, as it was in her power to afford, by the practice of what might be called economy in her own private expences, she frequently sent them. It had always been evident to her that such an income as theirs, under the direction of two persons so extravagant in their wants, and heedless of the future, must be very insufficient to their support; and whenever they changed their quarters, either Daisy or herself were sure of being applied to for some little assistance towards discharging their bills. Their manner of living, even when the restoration of peace dismissed them to a home, was unsettled in the extreme. They were always moving from place to place in quest of a cheap situation, and always spending more than they ought. His affection for her soon sunk into indifference; hers lasted a little longer; and in spite of her youth and her manners, she retained all the claims to reputation which her marriage had given her.

Though Potter could never receive him at Pemberlune, yet, for Lily’s sake, he assisted him further in his profession. Heather was occasionally a visitor there, when her husband was gone to enjoy himself in London or Bath; and with the Blacks they both of them frequently staid so long, that even Black’s good humour was overcome, and he proceeded so far as to talk of giving them a hint to be gone.

Miss Black was very deeply mortified by Potter’s marriage; but as she thought it advisable to retain the right of visiting at Pemberlune, she dropt all her resentment; was fonder than ever of Georgiana, almost as attentive to Potter as heretofore, and paid off every arrear of civility to Lily.

Pemberlune was now Georgiana’s home; and the attachment of the sisters was exactly what Potter had hoped to see. They were able to love each other even as well as they intended. Georgiana had the highest opinion in the world of Lily; though at first she often listened with an astonishment bordering on alarm at her lively, sportive, manner of talking to her brother. He, who had always inspired in herself a respect which almost overcame her affection, she now saw the object of open pleasantry. Her mind received knowledge which had never before fallen in her way. By Lily’s instructions, she began to comprehend that a woman may take liberties with her husband which a brother will not always allow in a sister more than ten years younger than himself.

Lady Astoria was extremely indignant on the marriage of her nephew; and as she gave way to all the genuine frankness of her character in her reply to the letter which announced its arrangement, she sent him language so very abusive, especially of Lily, that for some time all intercourse was at an end. But at length, by Lily’s persuasion, he was prevailed on to overlook the offence, and seek a reconciliation; and, after a little further resistance on the part of his aunt, her resentment gave way, either to her affection for him, or her curiosity to see how his wife conducted herself; and she condescended to wait on them at Pemberlune, in spite of that pollution which its woods had received, not merely from the presence of such a mistress, but the visits of her uncle and aunt from the city.

With the Galdwyns, they were always on the most intimate terms. Potter, as well as Lily, really loved them; and they were both ever sensible of the warmest gratitude towards the persons who, by bringing her into Derbyshire, had been the means of uniting them.

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