Pride and Prejudice: a Jily story

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Pride and Prejudice: a Jily story
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Jily Pride and Prejudice AUAs news reach of a young wizard, Black, settling into the neighbouring estate of Netherthorne, the witches of Sylvanbourn strive to make his acquaintance.Nobody knows a series of convenient, though unexpected, and controversial, nuptials would spring from such an occasion.Lest of all, the independent Lily and the resolutely cold Mr. Potter. (The text is Austen’s original novel, with name-character-place adjustments).
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About the story...- As an avid reader of Jily literature, I have always thought that their dynamic perfectly resembled that of the protagonists of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice: two people who are attracted to each other, without even realizing it, but who can’t at first ignore what they deem to be impossible defects of character.Deciding to pick up Austen’s novel, I thought it would be the easiest thing in the world to replace some names, add some extra definitions here and there, and transform it into James and Lily Potter’s story.- When reading this story, you will be reading Pride and Prejudice. I thought of rewriting the whole thing anew, but then it would have felt as a sort of insult to the author: the study of character and the careful construction of their dynamic cannot so easily be replicated.- Lily Evans and Elizabeth Bennet are spectacularly similar, and in fact they may share the same character. What bothers me, is that James’ and Darcy’s characters are nothing alike. You will feel it while reading, but I found no solution to it, for any correction would have destroyed the basis of the story. Their pureness of heart and impossible devotion to their loved one, however, remain unaltered.- The characters in this story will be magical. I thought to add some details here and there just to prove my point, but the essence itself remains that of a period, social work; not a fantasy. Humans divide themselves by means of titles and jobs, and the best I could do was add blood-status to the mix—an apparently unsurmountable barrier. The meanings of nobleship against workingmen, I have left unaltered, but I think they fit in just well with the blood discourse.- Some characters are taken directly from the Marauders fandom; others, I have decided to invent myself—namely Lily’s sisters (outside from Petunia) and James’ own sister.- If you’ve never read Pride and Prejudice and had been meaning to do so, reading this will be just as good as reading the novel instead.Credits to the two Js: Jane Austen and J.K.R.
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Mrs. Black

A few days after this visit, Mr. Black called again, and alone. His friend had left him that morning for London, but was to return home in ten days time. He sat with them above an hour, and was in remarkably good spirits. Mrs. Evans invited him to dine with them; but, with many expressions of concern, he confessed himself engaged elsewhere.

‘Next time you call,’ said she, ‘I hope we shall be more lucky.’

He should be particularly happy at any time, etc. etc.; and if she would give him leave, would take an early opportunity of waiting on them.

‘Can you come to-morrow?’

Yes, he had no engagement at all for to-morrow; and her invitation was accepted with alacrity.

He came, and in such very good time that the ladies were none of them dressed. In ran Mrs. Evans to her daughter’s room, in her dressing gown, and with her hair half finished, crying out:

‘My dear Daisy, make haste and hurry down. He is come–Mr. Black is come. He is, indeed. Make haste, make haste. Here, Sarah, come to Miss Evans this moment, and help her on with her gown. Never mind Miss Lily’s hair.’

‘We will be down as soon as we can,’ said Daisy; ‘but I dare say Violet is forwarder than either of us, for she went up stairs half an hour ago.’

‘Oh! hang Violet! what has she to do with it? Come be quick, be quick! Where is your sash, my dear?’

But when her mother was gone, Daisy would not be prevailed on to go down without one of her sisters.

The same anxiety to get them by themselves was visible again in the evening. After tea, Mr. Evans retired to the library, as was his custom, and Petunia went up stairs to her instrument. Two obstacles of the five being thus removed, Mrs. Evans sat looking and winking at Lily and Violet for a considerable time, without making any impression on them. Lily would not observe her; and when at last Violet did, she very innocently said, ‘What is the matter mamma? What do you keep winking at me for? What am I to do?’

‘Nothing child, nothing. I did not wink at you.’ She then sat still five minutes longer; but unable to waste such a precious occasion, she suddenly got up, and saying to Violet, ‘Come here, my love, I want to speak to you,’ took her out of the room. Daisy instantly gave a look at Lily which spoke her distress at such premeditation, and her entreaty that she would not give in to it. In a few minutes, Mrs. Evans half-opened the door and called out:

‘Lily, my dear, I want to speak with you.’

Lily was forced to go.

‘We may as well leave them by themselves you know;’ said her mother, as soon as she was in the hall. ‘Violet and I are going upstairs to sit in my dressing-room.’

Lily made no attempt to reason with her mother, but remained quietly in the hall, till she and Violet were out of sight, then returned into the drawing-room.

Mrs. Evans’s schemes for this day were ineffectual. Black was every thing that was charming, except the professed lover of her daughter. His ease and cheerfulness rendered him a most agreeable addition to their evening party; and he bore with the ill-judged officiousness of the mother, and heard all her silly remarks with a forbearance and command of countenance particularly grateful to the daughter.

He scarcely needed an invitation to stay supper; and before he went away, an engagement was formed, chiefly through his own and Mrs. Evans’s means, for his coming next morning to shoot with her husband.

After this day, Daisy said no more of her indifference. Not a word passed between the sisters concerning Black; but Lily went to bed in the happy belief that all must speedily be concluded, unless Mr. Potter returned within the stated time. Seriously, however, she felt tolerably persuaded that all this must have taken place with that gentleman’s concurrence.

Black was punctual to his appointment; and he and Mr. Evans spent the morning together, as had been agreed on. The latter was much more agreeable than his companion expected. There was nothing of presumption or folly in Black that could provoke his ridicule, or disgust him into silence; and he was more communicative, and less eccentric, than the other had ever seen him. Black of course returned with him to dinner; and in the evening Mrs. Evans’s invention was again at work to get every body away from him and her daughter. Lily, who had a letter to write, went into the breakfast room for that purpose soon after tea; for as the others were all going to sit down to cards, she could not be wanted to counteract her mother’s schemes.

But on returning to the drawing-room, when her letter was finished, she saw, to her infinite surprise, there was reason to fear that her mother had been too ingenious for her. On opening the door, she perceived her sister and Black standing together over the hearth, as if engaged in earnest conversation; and had this led to no suspicion, the faces of both, as they hastily turned round and moved away from each other, would have told it all. Their situation was awkward enough; but her’s she thought was still worse. Not a syllable was uttered by either; and Lily was on the point of going away again, when Black, who as well as the other had sat down, suddenly rose, and whispering a few words to her sister, ran out of the room.

Daisy could have no reserves from Lily, where confidence would give pleasure; and instantly embracing her, acknowledged, with the liveliest emotion, that she was the happiest creature in the world.

‘‘Tis too much!’ she added, ‘by far too much. I do not deserve it. Oh! why is not everybody as happy?’

Lily’s congratulations were given with a sincerity, a warmth, a delight, which words could but poorly express. Every sentence of kindness was a fresh source of happiness to Daisy. But she would not allow herself to stay with her sister, or say half that remained to be said for the present.

‘I must go instantly to my mother;’ she cried. ‘I would not on any account trifle with her affectionate solicitude; or allow her to hear it from anyone but myself. He is gone to my father already. Oh! Lily, to know that what I have to relate will give such pleasure to all my dear family! how shall I bear so much happiness!’

She then hastened away to her mother, who had purposely broken up the card party, and was sitting up stairs with Violet.

Lily, who was left by herself, now smiled at the rapidity and ease with which an affair was finally settled, that had given them so many previous months of suspense and vexation.

‘And this,’ said she, ‘is the end of all his friend’s anxious circumspection! of all his sister’s falsehood and contrivance! the happiest, wisest, most reasonable end!’

In a few minutes she was joined by Black, whose conference with her father had been short and to the purpose.

‘Where is your sister?’ said he hastily, as he opened the door.

‘With my mother up stairs. She will be down in a moment, I dare say.’

He then shut the door, and, coming up to her, claimed the good wishes and affection of a sister. Lily honestly and heartily expressed her delight in the prospect of their relationship. They shook hands with great cordiality; and then, till her sister came down, she had to listen to all he had to say of his own happiness, and of Daisy’s perfections; and in spite of his being a lover, Lily really believed all his expectations of felicity to be rationally founded, because they had for basis the excellent understanding, and super-excellent disposition of Daisy, and a general similarity of feeling and taste between her and himself.

It was an evening of no common delight to them all; the satisfaction of Miss Evans’s mind gave a glow of such sweet animation to her face, as made her look handsomer than ever. Violet simpered and smiled, and hoped her turn was coming soon. Mrs. Evans could not give her consent or speak her approbation in terms warm enough to satisfy her feelings, though she talked to Black of nothing else for half an hour; and when Mr. Evans joined them at supper, his voice and manner plainly showed how really happy he was.

Not a word, however, passed his lips in allusion to it, till their visitor took his leave for the night; but as soon as he was gone, he turned to his daughter, and said:

‘Daisy, I congratulate you. You will be a very happy woman.’

Daisy went to him instantly, kissed him, and thanked him for his goodness.

‘You are a good girl;’ he replied, ‘and I have great pleasure in thinking you will be so happily settled. I have not a doubt of your doing very well together. Your tempers are by no means unlike. You are each of you so complying, that nothing will ever be resolved on; so easy, that every servant will cheat you; and so generous, that you will always exceed your income.’

‘I hope not so. Imprudence or thoughtlessness in money matters would be unpardonable in me.’

‘Exceed their income! My dear Mr. Evans,’ cried his wife, ‘what are you talking of? Why, he has one thousand a year, and very likely more.’ Then addressing her daughter, ‘Oh! my dear, dear Daisy, I am so happy! I am sure I shan’t get a wink of sleep all night. I knew how it would be. I always said it must be so, at last. I was sure you could not be so beautiful for nothing! I remember, as soon as ever I saw him, when he first came into Hertfordshire last year, I thought how likely it was that you should come together. Oh! he is the handsomest young man that ever was seen!’

Snape, Heather, were all forgotten. Daisy was beyond competition her favourite child. At that moment, she cared for no other. Her younger sisters soon began to make interest with her for objects of happiness which she might in future be able to dispense.

Petunia petitioned for the use of the library at Netherthorne; and Violet begged very hard for a few balls there every winter.

Black, from this time, was of course a daily visitor at Sylvanbourn; coming frequently before breakfast, and always remaining till after supper; unless when some barbarous neighbour, who could not be enough detested, had given him an invitation to dinner which he thought himself obliged to accept.

Lily had now but little time for conversation with her sister; for while he was present, Daisy had no attention to bestow on anyone else; but she found herself considerably useful to both of them in those hours of separation that must sometimes occur. In the absence of Daisy, he always attached himself to Lily, for the pleasure of talking of her; and when Black was gone, Daisy constantly sought the same means of relief.

‘He has made me so happy,’ said she, one evening, ‘by telling me that he was totally ignorant of my being in town last spring! I had not believed it possible.’

‘I suspected as much,’ replied Lily. ‘But how did he account for it?’

‘It must have been his sister’s doing. They were certainly no friends to his acquaintance with me, which I cannot wonder at, since he might have chosen so much more advantageously in many respects. But when they see, as I trust they will, that their brother is happy with me, they will learn to be contented, and we shall be on good terms again; though we can never be what we once were to each other.’

‘That is the most unforgiving speech,’ said Lily, ‘that I ever heard you utter. Good girl! It would vex me, indeed, to see you again the dupe of Miss Black’s pretended regard.’

‘Would you believe it, Lily, that when he went to town last November, he really loved me, and nothing but a persuasion of my being indifferent would have prevented his coming down again!’

‘He made a little mistake to be sure; but it is to the credit of his modesty.’

This naturally introduced a panegyric from Daisy on his diffidence, and the little value he put on his own good qualities. Lily was pleased to find that he had not betrayed the interference of his friend; for, though Daisy had the most generous and forgiving heart in the world, she knew it was a circumstance which must prejudice her against him.

‘I am certainly the most fortunate creature that ever existed!’ cried Daisy. ‘Oh! Lily, why am I thus singled from my family, and blessed above them all! If I could but see you as happy! If there were but such another man for you!’

‘If you were to give me forty such men, I never could be so happy as you. Till I have your disposition, your goodness, I never can have your happiness. No, no, let me shift for myself; and, perhaps, if I have very good luck, I may meet with another Mr. Dursley in time.’

The situation of affairs in the Sylvanbourn family could not be long a secret. Mrs. Evans was privileged to whisper it to Mrs. Pettigrew, and she ventured, without any permission, to do the same by all her neighbours in Myrthvale.

The Evans were speedily pronounced to be the luckiest family in the world, though only a few weeks before, when Heather had first run away, they had been generally proved to be marked out for misfortune.

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