Pride and Prejudice: a Jily story

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Pride and Prejudice: a Jily story
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Jily Pride and Prejudice AUAs news reach of a young wizard, Black, settling into the neighbouring estate of Netherthorne, the witches of Sylvanbourn strive to make his acquaintance.Nobody knows a series of convenient, though unexpected, and controversial, nuptials would spring from such an occasion.Lest of all, the independent Lily and the resolutely cold Mr. Potter. (The text is Austen’s original novel, with name-character-place adjustments).
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About the story...- As an avid reader of Jily literature, I have always thought that their dynamic perfectly resembled that of the protagonists of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice: two people who are attracted to each other, without even realizing it, but who can’t at first ignore what they deem to be impossible defects of character.Deciding to pick up Austen’s novel, I thought it would be the easiest thing in the world to replace some names, add some extra definitions here and there, and transform it into James and Lily Potter’s story.- When reading this story, you will be reading Pride and Prejudice. I thought of rewriting the whole thing anew, but then it would have felt as a sort of insult to the author: the study of character and the careful construction of their dynamic cannot so easily be replicated.- Lily Evans and Elizabeth Bennet are spectacularly similar, and in fact they may share the same character. What bothers me, is that James’ and Darcy’s characters are nothing alike. You will feel it while reading, but I found no solution to it, for any correction would have destroyed the basis of the story. Their pureness of heart and impossible devotion to their loved one, however, remain unaltered.- The characters in this story will be magical. I thought to add some details here and there just to prove my point, but the essence itself remains that of a period, social work; not a fantasy. Humans divide themselves by means of titles and jobs, and the best I could do was add blood-status to the mix—an apparently unsurmountable barrier. The meanings of nobleship against workingmen, I have left unaltered, but I think they fit in just well with the blood discourse.- Some characters are taken directly from the Marauders fandom; others, I have decided to invent myself—namely Lily’s sisters (outside from Petunia) and James’ own sister.- If you’ve never read Pride and Prejudice and had been meaning to do so, reading this will be just as good as reading the novel instead.Credits to the two Js: Jane Austen and J.K.R.
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No Gretna Green

The whole party were in hopes of a letter from Mr. Evans the next morning, but the post came in without bringing a single line from him. His family knew him to be, on all common occasions, a most negligent and dilatory correspondent; but at such a time they had hoped for exertion. They were forced to conclude that he had no pleasing intelligence to send; but even of that they would have been glad to be certain. Mr. Galdwyn had waited only for the letters before he set off.

When he was gone, they were certain at least of receiving constant information of what was going on, and their uncle promised, at parting, to prevail on Mr. Evans to return to Sylvanbourn, as soon as he could, to the great consolation of his sister, who considered it as the only security for her husband’s not being killed in a duel.

Mrs. Galdwyn and the children were to remain in Hertfordshire a few days longer, as the former thought her presence might be serviceable to her nieces. She shared in their attendance on Mrs. Evans, and was a great comfort to them in their hours of freedom. Their other aunt also visited them frequently, and always, as she said, with the design of cheering and heartening them up–though, as she never came without reporting some fresh instance of Snape’s extravagance or irregularity, she seldom went away without leaving them more dispirited than she found them.

All Myrthvale seemed striving to blacken the wizard who, but three months before, had been almost an angel of light. He was declared to be in debt to every tradesman in the place, and his intrigues, all honoured with the title of seduction, had been extended into every tradesman’s family. Everybody declared that he was the wickedest young wizard in the world; and everybody began to find out that they had always distrusted the appearance of his goodness. Lily, though she did not credit above half of what was said, believed enough to make her former assurance of her sister’s ruin more certain; and even Daisy, who believed still less of it, became almost hopeless, more especially as the time was now come when, if they had gone to Scotland, which she had never before entirely despaired of, they must in all probability have gained some news of them.

Mr. Galdwyn left Sylvanbourn on Sunday; on Tuesday his wife received a letter from him; it told them that, on his arrival, he had immediately found out his brother, and persuaded him to come to Grimchurch Alley; that Mr. Evans had been to Epsom and Clapham, before his arrival, but without gaining any satisfactory information; and that he was now determined to inquire at all the principal hotels in town, as Mr. Evans thought it possible they might have gone to one of them, on their first coming to London, before they procured lodgings. Mr. Galdwyn himself did not expect any success from this measure, but as his brother was eager in it, he meant to assist him in pursuing it. He added that Mr. Evans seemed wholly disinclined at present to leave London and promised to write again very soon. There was also a postscript to this effect:

I have written to Colonel Longbottom to desire him to find out, if possible, from some of the young man’s intimates in the regiment, whether Snape has any relations or connections who would be likely to know in what part of town he has now concealed himself. If there were anyone that one could apply to with a probability of gaining such a clue as that, it might be of essential consequence. At present we have nothing to guide us. Colonel Longbottom will, I dare say, do everything in his power to satisfy us on this head. But, on second thoughts, perhaps, Lily could tell us what relations he has now living, better than any other person.’

Lily was at no loss to understand from whence this deference to her authority proceeded; but it was not in her power to give any information of so satisfactory a nature as the compliment deserved. She had never heard of his having had any relations, except a father and mother, both of whom had been dead many years. It was possible, however, that some of his companions in the Bedshire might be able to give more information; and though she was not very sanguine in expecting it, the application was a something to look forward to.

Every day at Sylvanbourn was now a day of anxiety; but the most anxious part of each was when the post was expected. The arrival of letters was the grand object of every morning’s impatience. Through letters, whatever of good or bad was to be told would be communicated, and every succeeding day was expected to bring some news of importance.

But before they heard again from Mr. Galdwyn, a letter arrived for their father, from a different quarter, from Mr. Dursley; which, as Daisy had received directions to open all that came for him in his absence, she accordingly read; and Lily, who knew what curiosities his letters always were, looked over her, and read it likewise. It was as follows:

My dear Sir,

I feel myself called upon, by our relationship, and my situation in life, to condole with you on the grievous affliction you are now suffering under, of which we were yesterday informed by a letter from Hertfordshire. Be assured, my dear sir, that Mrs. Dursley and myself sincerely sympathise with you and all your respectable family, in your present distress, which must be of the bitterest kind, because proceeding from a cause which no time can remove. No arguments shall be wanting on my part that can alleviate so severe a misfortune–or that may comfort you, under a circumstance that must be of all others the most afflicting to a parent’s mind. The death of your daughter would have been a blessing in comparison of this. And it is the more to be lamented, because there is reason to suppose as my dear Marlene informs me, that this licentiousness of behaviour in your daughter has proceeded from a faulty degree of indulgence; though, at the same time, for the consolation of yourself and Mrs. Evans, I am inclined to think that her own disposition must be naturally bad, or she could not be guilty of such an enormity, at so early an age. Howsoever that may be, you are grievously to be pitied; in which opinion I am not only joined by Mrs. Dursley, but likewise by Lady Astoria and her daughter, to whom I have related the affair. They agree with me in apprehending that this false step in one daughter will be injurious to the fortunes of all the others; for who, as Lady Astoria herself condescendingly says, will connect themselves with such a family? And this consideration leads me moreover to reflect, with augmented satisfaction, on a certain event of last November; for had it been otherwise, I must have been involved in all your sorrow and disgrace. Let me then advise you, dear sir, to console yourself as much as possible, to throw off your unworthy child from your affection for ever, and leave her to reap the fruits of her own heinous offense.

I am, dear sir, etc., etc.

Mr. Galdwyn did not write again till he had received an answer from Colonel Longbottom; and then he had nothing of a pleasant nature to send. It was not known that Snape had a single relationship with whom he kept up any connection, and it was certain that he had no near one living. His former acquaintances had been numerous; but since he had been in the militia, it did not appear that he was on terms of particular friendship with any of them. There was no one, therefore, who could be pointed out as likely to give any news of him. And in the wretched state of his own finances, there was a very powerful motive for secrecy, in addition to his fear of discovery by Heather’s relations, for it had just transpired that he had left gaming debts behind him to a very considerable amount. Colonel Longbottom believed that more than two hundred Galleons would be necessary to clear his expenses at Brighton. He owed a good deal in town, but his debts of honour were still more formidable. Mr. Galdwyn did not attempt to conceal these particulars from the Sylvanbourn family. Daisy heard them with horror. ‘A gamester!’ she cried. ‘This is wholly unexpected. I had not an idea of it.’

Mr. Galdwyn added in his letter, that they might expect to see their father at home on the following day, which was Saturday. Rendered spiritless by the ill-success of all their endeavours, he had yielded to his brother-in-law’s entreaty that he would return to his family, and leave it to him to do whatever occasion might suggest to be advisable for continuing their pursuit. When Mrs. Evans was told of this, she did not express so much satisfaction as her children expected, considering what her anxiety for his life had been before.

‘What, is he coming home, and without poor Heather?’ she cried. ‘Sure he will not leave London before he has found them. Who is to fight Snape, and make him marry her, if he comes away?’

As Mrs. Galdwyn began to wish to be at home, it was settled that she and the children should go to London, at the same time that Mr. Evans came from it. The coach, therefore, took them the first stage of their journey, and brought its master back to Sylvanbourn.

Mrs. Galdwyn went away in all the perplexity about Lily and her Derbyshire friend that had attended her from that part of the world. His name had never been voluntarily mentioned before them by her niece; and the kind of half-expectation which Mrs. Galdwyn had formed, of their being followed by a letter from him, had ended in nothing. Lily had received none since her return that could come from Pemberlune.

The present unhappy state of the family rendered any other excuse for the lowness of her spirits unnecessary; nothing, therefore, could be fairly conjectured from that, though Lily, who was by this time tolerably well acquainted with her own feelings, was perfectly aware that, had she known nothing of Potter, she could have borne the dread of Heather’s infamy somewhat better. It would have spared her, she thought, one sleepless night out of two.

When Mr. Evans arrived, he had all the appearance of his usual philosophic composure. He said as little as he had ever been in the habit of saying; made no mention of the business that had taken him away, and it was some time before his daughters had courage to speak of it.

It was not till the afternoon, when he had joined them at tea, that Lily ventured to introduce the subject; and then, on her briefly expressing her sorrow for what he must have endured, he replied, ‘Say nothing of that. Who should suffer but myself? It has been my own doing, and I ought to feel it.’

‘You must not be too severe upon yourself,’ replied Lily.

‘You may well warn me against such an evil. Human nature is so prone to fall into it! No, Lily, let me once in my life feel how much I have been to blame. I am not afraid of being overpowered by the impression. It will pass away soon enough.’

‘Do you suppose them to be in London?’

‘Yes; where else can they be so well concealed?’

‘And Heather used to want to go to London,’ added Violet.

‘She is happy then,’ said her father drily; ‘and her residence there will probably be of some duration.’

Then after a short silence he continued:

‘Lily, I bear you no ill-will for being justified in your advice to me last May, which, considering the event, shows some greatness of mind.’

They were interrupted by Miss Evans, who came to fetch her mother’s tea.

‘This is a parade,’ he cried, ‘which does one good; it gives such an elegance to misfortune! Another day I will do the same; I will sit in my library, in my nightcap and powdering gown, and give as much trouble as I can; or, perhaps, I may defer it till Violet runs away.’

‘I am not going to run away, papa,’ said Violet fretfully. ‘If I should ever go to Brighton, I would behave better than Heather.’

You go to Brighton. I would not trust you so near it as Eastbourne for fifty pounds! No, Violet, I have at last learnt to be cautious, and you will feel the effects of it. No officer is ever to enter into my house again, nor even to pass through the village. Balls will be absolutely prohibited, unless you stand up with one of your sisters. And you are never to stir out of doors till you can prove that you have spent ten minutes of every day in a rational manner.’

Violet, who took all these threats in a serious light, began to cry.

‘Well, well,’ said he, ‘do not make yourself unhappy. If you are a good girl for the next ten years, I will take you to a review at the end of them.’

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