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Look at You (Needing Me)

Look at You (Needing Me)

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Updated
14.04.2025
Fandom
Harry Potter - J. K. Rowling
Characters
James Potter, Evan Rosier, Regulus Black & Barty Crouch Jr. & Evan Rosier
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Angst Inspired by Music Hurt No Comfort Kind Of technically SO James Potter Bashing Peter Pettigrew Being An Asshole Death Eater Activites Author is a Slytherin/DE apologist bite me abt it implies Rosekiller
James confronts Evan in a corridor of the Slytherin commons after the Jegulus breakup, looking for answers he won't be getting. Evan does, however, say something that he probably shouldn't have, something that could change the course of the war and J...